im still confused on how old louise is. i deeply feel like she is 25 but she could also just be like 18

she is such a closet lesbian fucks sake just let her have fun fr

i kinda forgot how xenophobic louise can be

more banger content

lmao sanguine the funny twat

the first act was fucking epic. holy shit yeahhh

Very enjoyable story. Glad the last chapter gave Louise some time to process and breathe. Hope this continues sometime soon!

I really hope you continue this amazing story

Really enjoyed this work, kept me from sleep for a few days because I couldn't put it down, thank you for sharing.
Looking forward to an update (fingers crossed for this year).

sounds like a Priest, Wizard and a Vampire walk into a bar

I see this fiction is a nerf fiction, well another book to the never touch list.

I must admit, I’m a bit apprehensive. Great writing and characterisation as always, but this is starting to look like another “character comes back from other universe OP and dominates” fic.

Honestly, Louise’s journey in Skyrim was getting extremely interesting and fun to read. Her development into a tougher person, having to overcome challenges which she was ill equipped to handle in creative ways, leaving behind her old prejudices and overall evolving as a character. Not to mention all the new friendships she was creating and the great fleshing out of many of Skyrim’s side characters.

Now it feels like we’ve skipped a large percentage of that development to the end point version of her. All those potential stories and challenges, all of those new skills to learn and people to meet, the fascinating cultures and environments of Skyrim to traverse and react to, just not shown.

What was already shown gave a strong enough foundation for the Louise we now see, but it still seems like such a shame to miss out on all that. Overall, I hope that Louise herself isn’t the only/last Skyrim-based appearance we see moving forward.

That said, this is only the first chapter of the larger arc, so I suppose I’m jumping the gun a bit.

Wait, so the rest of this story takes place in the Familiar Zero world?

Damn, this was becoming such a good Skyrim novelisation. I wanted to see more.

though... this is kinda mid. I'll keep reading later, see if it gets any better.

look, a cunt that hides under the guest name! look, and laugh!