Knut i think it should be lol

Not bad. But I’m not reading a book about magic to read about him using tools and shit.

First 15-16 chapters are great then it starts to get comfunsing… you go into too mich detail and new things almost anywhere and it gets inconsistent

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HE'S NOT DEAD YET.

Headbastards Must Die because they are Headbastards who must die as it is clear that Headbastards Must Die.

Twisted Sister. Enough Said.

Kinda sad this author never finished a single one of their fics. Writer's block moment.

You made remus act to much like a father harry’s father in this chapter imo the bike was his fathers he has more right then anyone to learn to ride it great story so far tho!

I loved this and your other stories. I hope you continue and finish this story, i've enjoyed reading it.

I hope this gets continued at some point. It's already starting to get real interesting.

Not another redemption for the ferret he does not deserve it

Great story

i say deep six Ron he keeps Harry from having other friends

when are you going to finish it