Reviews for Chill of Battle
lucel18 chapter 1 . 10/8/2017
I like this...hope you continue it...Thank you!
HaiJu chapter 1 . 5/30/2016
Eenteresting... Too bad this is a one shot, I really liked the interactions between Loki and Jane. I could definitely see this as a four, five-chapter fic.

Anyhoo, thanks for writing!

-Hj
helenxxx chapter 1 . 8/2/2015
Very good action sequences and corresponding really well to Jane's thought processes
amr56 chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
I like how you write Loki and Thor. Thor cares in a way that is sincere but very "in your face," and Loki has such an attitude all the time, but is observant and (sometimes) helpful. I like your stories. Thank you for sharing them!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Love it.
Thank you for sharing x
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
cute!
FIRE ELF MAIDEN chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
wonderful job.
pallyndrome chapter 1 . 9/10/2014
I'm a little curious to see where this goes...
Ren chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
I absolutely LOVE this 3 You write the characters so well - especially Loki :) The dialog is always so believable.
female'wraith chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
You tease:) This is like throwing diamonds to us:) Great story:)
JigokuShoujosRevenge chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
That was fun. I don't just something about Jane being in the dark and being kept there and then thinking 'Oh whatever.' And Loki turned his back all epically leading them elsewhere. Also the battle scenes and attacks were easy to visualize.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
I want to know what happens next! :)
pankolicious16 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Interesting topic:) i like it
Tricksterkat209 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Ohhh, I like it! I would love to make a well-rounded comment but I am too tired to even attempt that.
I'm basically speechless and I love love love how well you write the characters. Nothing ever feels forced our insanely out of character. (Actually, I think so far nothing you have written sounded ooc.)
Very nice of Loki to fix Jane's shoulder. Of course, that's just so she won't slow them down even more. Fragile and useless mortal that she is. ;P
Teri chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
What a pleasant surprise for my stressful workday, getting to read a new quick story by Ione :)
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