|Reviews for Hello|
| WhiteLunaNight chapter 8 . 12/29/2015
I am really really really sad that you are putting this story on hiatus! :( :( Im not very good at giving, writing or creating prompts but if you still wanna write this story here's a small one: on the day of her coronation Elsa sees a strange figure at the windows of the ball room/bedroom any room you want. She deciding its just a figure of her imagination tries to forget about it, key word TRIES. She sees it again and decides to investigate. You can figure out the rest.) i hope you continue this and if someone adopted this i would very much like to read it. Good luck!
| WhiteLunaNight chapter 1 . 12/29/2015
This story although it is fiction seems so real, you know what i mean? You write it so in the character (at least in my opinion) that i can't help but feel disappointed when i remember that this is just fanfiction and not the real movie '( Anyway i am totally in love with this story amd the writing and everything else. Can't wait to read everything else :)
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/16/2014
I really like this! Please update soon
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/14/2014
Love it love it love it!
| Mickyrock5 chapter 5 . 9/10/2014
keep writing please such a awesome story!
| Mickyrock5 chapter 3 . 9/8/2014
if I were Jack I bet I would get mad and run of after confronting them
| Geminiagate chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
Great work :)
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2014
Please keep writing this its so good
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
| Mickyrock5 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Wow that is amazing!