|Reviews for We Didn't?|
| Drusilla Maxima chapter 2 . 10/26/2014
You know, it's well-written overall, and the "morning after" is always a fun plot. My only issue is this - you've purposely avoided naming your main character. I don't know why; it doesn't seem like it's a plot point. Not naming your protagonist has led to some really awkward phrasing, and some confusing passages. Moreover, you abruptly - and briefly - change from your protagonist's POV to Damar's in Chapter 1, without making it clear with a page break. Because of that, it took me three reads to figure out what was going on in Chapter 1.
That said, it's a really fun read so far, and I hope you take this for what it is - concrit - and not any suggestion that this story is bad. I genuinely hope you keep writing!
| suburbantimewaster chapter 2 . 10/16/2014
Another great chapter! I love the forbidden list between Weyoun and the main character!
| suburbantimewaster chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Looks like you're off to a good start. Who is this woman? How will she cope with her mistake? I look forward to finding out.
| thaifighter30 chapter 2 . 9/6/2014
Oh yes this is getting better and better. You must go on with this. ; )
| thaifighter30 chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
Getting very interesting, please continue. : )