|Reviews for How Some Children Played at Butcher|
| LeeMarieJack chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
Creepy chapter. Where ever this is going it looks like no place pleasant. Carry on.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 5 . 9/19/2014
Still a talent for great visuals but your plot reminds me of the spiders at work. Perhaps the pattern will come clear when all the spinning is done.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 4 . 9/18/2014
That quite an effective visual there. Interesting but not helping in making this whole story any clearer. I think you are going to have to speak plainly for a couple of paragraphs.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 3 . 9/16/2014
The distress is ramping up. What is Dean hiding and why?
| LeeMarieJack chapter 2 . 9/10/2014
Dean is as scary as anything else that might suddenly appear without reason. Nice writing, by the way.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Yes, well that was completely crazy. I haven't a clue what's going on but I like it!