Reviews for Loss
Deandra chapter 1 . 11/8/2015
Very powerful. Nicely done.

As someone else said, it would make it more readable if you added a blank line between paragraphs. This spacing works on the printed page of a book, but not so much on the screen.

- Deandra
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 1/13/2015
It must have been hard for Eomer to lose his parents.
EugeniaVictoria chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
This was wonderful! Thanks for sharing. I really liked your Éomer and I think I caught a glimpse of Théoden's canon-like kindness and warmth as well.
earthdragon chapter 1 . 9/7/2014
Good story, but you need to reformat this and add spacing between the paragraphs and conversations. Presented as it currently is - in a solid block of words - makes it very difficult to read.