wtf, a yamanka searched his mind because they think he's delusional or brainwashed? There's a lot of information in his mind that a Chuin definitely shouldn't know. He was captain of the anbu for God's sake, he knows how the leaf anbu works inside and out, this information was simply ignored by the yamanka and given as implanted information? What other things does he know that he shouldn't? It's not the kind of thing you dismiss out of hand...

last 2 chapters are slash. although light. aka itachi dates a dude.

it improved but there was still weridness and you seem to make minito too afraid of mikoto for scared of woman because woman reasons. I personally don't like her because he jabed her verbally so she makes note to do the same in public to him, during a council meeting. Being with such a person would be exhausting.
would of like a scene where instead of the 3 genin going to tackle itachi sasuke instead confronts his mother saying that itachi is good and she shouldn't kill him. That would have been amusing to see the viciousness bite back against her.

improvement but still can't get over the random they know trope.
oh you are thrown into a parallel world bam guess what there are a dozen others who know too. woo

that was shit.
instead of sliping up or something reasonable you pull a hey there is someone who knows and attacks you while you are weak then takes over your mother so they both get the confession out of a "helpless" itachi lol

I find it odd that he has to act like he remembers everyone when it would be much simply to imply that the "brainwashing" removed his memories fore for 10 years or so. Anything before that could just be attributed to bad memory or weird brainwashing shit shoved in.

kinda wanted him to reveal his not being a simple chuunin but whatev. this is cool 2

surprisingly well written. n funny.

Didn’t they just establish that the most likely result of claiming to be from another world would be for them to squint, shrug, and determine that he had cracked and that Itachi had developed the delusion that he was from another world.

Really enjoyed this alternate take on it.

this was really good

Inexplicably perceptive woman.
Itachi was undercover for years amongst powerful and paranoid missing ninja.
He cannot be this easy to read, she cannot be this observant.

This character has ruined whatever enjoyment of the fic I had.

aww a shame. but alright, i understand that feeling though it would be nice if you could come back to finish this. but alright

just say you have amnesia please. all of your memories are replaced etc. why took the hard way? or maybe they would be suspicious if you did itachi?

I sob every time I read this chapter