|Reviews for Until The End: Dormant|
| Sakura123 chapter 11 . 8/3/2018
This is a pretty solid story. I really love the relationship between Squall and his daughter. Additionally, I think yours might be the only story that actually points out how violating Ellone's power and her actions in Final Fantasy VIII were and how inexcusable it was, regardless of her intent. I wish I saw more of that in FF8 fics. That said, I like how you've managed to build up your mythos behind the Sorceress/Knight relationship (presumably based on all the theory-crafting on stuff that's otherwise been debunked) and how it effects Knights specifically.
I'm honestly hoping Squall and his daughter gets away from SeeD and their ilk. If you decide to update, I'll be around.
| Anakin-Smolo chapter 11 . 11/2/2016
Well, it is 5:53 am and I stayed up reading this all night. That's as big as compliments get, isn't it? :P Normally, I'd do chapter by chapter reviews, but it is also 5:53am hahaha. I am particularly intrigue with how sorcery works, and what exactly is going on on the moon. Those were two questions the game left entirely too open. Hope to see more soon!
| Maxton chapter 11 . 7/16/2016
I hate seed.. I hope he kills them all, they created the very problem they are hunting.
| Maxton chapter 3 . 7/16/2016
This is intriguing. I had never considered that the very people Squall considered friends would and could turn out to be his enemies.. It is like a vicious circle. Ultimicea comes back in time to achieve time compression and become a God, rule everything.. Seed is created to stop her, and then hunts down all other sorceresses, which is exactly what spurned on Ultimicea and her hate. The persecution of her kind.. She just went insane..
I can't wait to figure out why Rinoa when nuts and attacked Squall, or what kind of reaction the others will have when they confront him and his daughter..
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/10/2016
Been awhile, thought you'd abandoned it, thanks for updating. I've forgotten details already, may have to go back and reread the whole thing.
| FF9Zidane chapter 11 . 7/8/2016
Oh maaaaan! They know it's him!
I always get so pumped for this when it updates. XD
I'm sorry to hear that you got crazy sick :( I hope you continue to be to feel better
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 11 . 7/8/2016
I can't believe they still haven't come to the conclusion that it may be them themselves who creates Ultimacia. I mean seriously, being hunted down for something you haven't done would cause anyone to snap eventually.
It's like a self-fulfilling prophesy
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 10 . 4/14/2016
How is Squall so stupid as to not realize that there is like an 99% chance that he is the one who inherited Rinoa's power?
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 4 . 4/14/2016
I have no idea what the actual fuck is going on. So Squall has 3 sets of wings huh? Or was it his imagination?
| FF9Zidane chapter 10 . 3/17/2016
I was so excited to see an update for this chilling in my e-mail! Want lie I did re-read everything else as well. It was a great chapter, and as much as I hate seeing them so desperate I'm kinda curious how everyone is gonna react once/if they are caught. Can't wait for the next update \o/
| Guest chapter 10 . 3/11/2016
Just found and binge-read this fic. It's excellent, keep up the great work!
| SilentStarlightSky chapter 9 . 12/8/2015
I'm enjoying your story.
| Super Guest chapter 9 . 11/23/2015
| rebirth-flame chapter 9 . 11/23/2015
I remembered leaving a guess about how Chayla acquired the power and the horror that happened on her birth, but reading this chapter with the actual events being told really... broke my heart. I might have over reacted a bit and cried at the part where Squall and baby Chayla hid from Rin's pursue... and once again at the part Harren told Squall to grieve TT
Now excuse me I need to re read from the beginning again because I've forgotten things and because this chapter is such an info dump I want to find out if somehow you've hinted about something in earlier chapters, particularly the part about Rin wanting to reincarnate Squall...
| Strings805 chapter 9 . 11/21/2015
Ok, first things first. Kudos for stating what parts of the canon you're not going to use for the sake of the story. It's out on the table for all to see, and lays the ground for the story to come.
2nd...wow. This chapter got dark. It definitely answered a lot of questions, and has set the stage for...I can't even imagine. I feel like Harren is going to try and and solve the origin of Adel and Larissa, and at what a cost, I can't say. Hopefully he's able to help Squall in his endeavors to protect Chayla. But...damn. The twin? The possible explanation for why Chayla was born a Sorceress...just, damn.
Harren's lines about how Squall needed to grieve, to accept what was and what will very likely be...we talked about some of it via PM, but way to tie it all in so subtly. This was a hell of a chapter; I'm glad you got a chance to update!