Reviews for The Ash Connection II: The Rising
JordanMax chapter 31 . 7/12/2016
HOLY SHIT THAT WAS DAFHCGCSFGHFXASWWFGH

OMG ok ssooo that title tho, i thought ash was going to take it all but he didnt and I didn't expect that at all, that was brilliant and truly kept everyone guessing until the very end- well atleast me because I didn't see it coming and tbh I got a bit emotional at the end, they made history and changed the system:)

Wooo Paul and Dawn are officially having a baby and I'm glad he's not mad about it lol

This was excellent its hard to even put my words down like I'm just wow! :)
asnlcdsbaj chapter 31 . 7/12/2016
I AM INTERNALLY SCREAMING RIGHT NOW. Oh my gosh that was such a stunning chapter, and I'm really satisfied with the way you've ended things. I wanted both of them to win, and I've never understood why there was an Indigo League instead of two different leagues for Kanto and Johto. This right here is a perfect solution for me, with great writing and so worth the hype. It's so amazing to see the original Ash Connection lead to this, though Silver's reaction to Ash's technical win would be fun to see. Thank you as usual!
Kelly chapter 31 . 7/12/2016
I'm honestly speechless, this was such an impactful and satisfying last chapter. The battle was spot-on, and you hit all the right notes when it came to each character. I honestly couldn't stop smiling when Leaf suddenly became giddy after the battle, it felt like instantly everything was different and that she was having actual fun and enjoyment for once.

The Misty and Ash kiss made my heart warm, and the ending line made me practically scream. I don't think this could have ended any other way, and it's so satisfying to feel everyone's genuine happiness and this new turn of events and change.

I eagerly await the epilogue! I'm sad that this story is almost over, but I know it's not truly over even still :')
Anon chapter 30 . 7/10/2016
This has seriously been the best fanfiction I have ever read. Please, please, please continue! I was crying in some moments, laughing in some, and connecting to the characters. I know it'll end soon - I don't want it to, because this was a beautiful story. The grammar, the characters, and the plot. All of ot was thorough and amazing, and I loved how you added all these new charatcers, including the Kalosian group. I don't know if this will ever become a Trilogy, but I hope you know; you have supporters out there, and I honestly can't decide wheter I liked The Ash Connection or The Ash Connection II better. And for every fanfiction I've read, I've always said: 'this was truly the best fanfiction I've read!' But when I say it now, I truly mean it; this is truly the best fanfiction I've ever read. And I hope you update soon, so that I can see the battle between Ash and Leaf, and if it's taking awhile, I don't mind! People get busy, and on a high-quality story like this, it can take time. Just please update soon, because I have honestly enjoyed this so much... ~Anon
Guest chapter 28 . 7/10/2016
So... Gary... died...?
Guest chapter 18 . 7/6/2016
I'm beginning to think that whenever the owner of the Pokémon dies-the Pokémon dies with the trainer. However this wasn't the instant for Paul...
FicReader chapter 30 . 7/6/2016
Oh wow, a lot of things are going to happen with our three couples. First of all, a double wedding wouldn't be a bad thing to celebrate ;) And of course, Lyra being pregnant?! Took me a second to realize what Silver meant, but there should also be congrats in order too. Ash is going to be an uncle! If his brother is willing to tell him.

This chapter is nicely wrapping up past things in previous chapters. Leaf's concern about the upcoming match with Ash, Burgundy facing her previous student's parents, a lot of realization on most people's parts about themselves and others that could determine what their relationship would be like in the future.

We still don't have a definite standing between Dawn and Paul. Honestly, if they don't go back together I wouldn't mind. Maybe a break or forever break would ease their hearts, but being friends or coming to mutual terms would be the best.
Guest chapter 30 . 6/28/2016
. . . I thought you said Karina's Purrloin was dead . . .
Guest chapter 23 . 6/28/2016
Okay . . . Serena's kind of annoying . . . And irrelevant . . .
TheDivines chapter 30 . 6/19/2016
I actually want Ash to lose the champion match keep Leaf as the Champion to many story have Ash win in the end. Nothing I've read is like your story arcs though but I still don't want to see Ash win. Great chapter abd story so far hopefully more comes soon
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 30 . 6/17/2016
Ooh. Oliver's getting married. I wonder who the lucky lady is. That's great that Ash captured the Joltik. It makes sense. That's wonderful that Burgundy got Karina's Purrloin.
Eagle.
reppad98 chapter 30 . 6/17/2016
Oh wow, it made me so happy to see an update for this story! There's still so much explaining to do, so many loose ends to tie up, and I guess this chapter will start with that... Let's get started!
Ah, Gary is recovered, and has several good and interesting theories about what exactly happened. I wonder if we'll ever really know, I don't suppose so, and I guess it doesn't really matter that much. We haven't figured out everything about our own world yet, and we can't expect them to do that either haha.
Sweet scene with Paul and Emily and Cynthia, I really do hope Paul will be fine...
Leaf and Lance's relationship is really quite complicated, and poor Leaf, with what all she went through. At least she seems somewhat content now, maybe.
Hm, I wonder if Max will become the new Hoenn Champion, he is a good battler...
Ah, Chili and Burgundy, that's true, I'd have almost forgotten about those two. And I guess everyone needs closure, it's been a rough time. I liked the scene with Karina's parents, it was well done, and though Burgundy said it was just a one-night stand, she does send mixed signals. Perhaps she needs time, poor girl.
I think that was a good ending for N and his sisters, see the world and figure out your own truth and what they want in life. Yeah, with Silver and Leaf and everything that happened - it's complicated, and I guess it just shows that everything isn't black and white. I do hope that Ash becomes Champion, he deserves it. That scene between Ash and Misty was very sweet.
And May and Drew, too, very sweet, and it's really nice that there will be a wedding.
It's indeed a happy ending for Team Rocket, and good that Trip's mother recovered, and Trip and Georgia seem pretty close, if he introduced her to his mother, perhaps they're making it more official... XD
I wonder what's up with Leaf and her odd reaction to May and Drew's announcement. I guess she's just trying to deal with everything. At least everything is settled with Ritchie now, and Gary and Leaf are getting closer again, good. Gary can't have it easy dealing with Leaf, but they're good together.
And oh what, oh god, Lyra is pregnant? She is, isn't she? Oh wow, that's so cool, I definitely hadn't seen that coming. That last scene was so sweet, too, and now Silver won't have to leave Lyra ever again. Oh yay, I'm so happy now :D
Thank you so much for updating, I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter, and keep writing! ! !
Tacchan0530 chapter 30 . 6/17/2016
This one is really awesome. I loved the May-Drew scene here and also Ash-Misty. The match between Leaf and Ash. Waiting for the next one! Take Care!
*Cheers*
Organometallic Tetrahedron chapter 30 . 6/16/2016
Simply too beautiful for words...all those character interactions, the way you're tying everything up...just wow! Looking forward to the battle of August 29th.
Catherine45 chapter 30 . 6/16/2016
Your writing seems even better in this chapter idk why but it was so good.

So the epilogue is gonna have the wedding again, probably? I'm down for it :p

Loved this chapter!
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