Reviews for The Ash Connection II: The Rising
champion lyra chapter 20 . 8/17/2018
I'm rereading this for the first time since you finished it - the TAC series is still my favorite fanfic of all time, by the way - and Drew's speech in this chapter still sticks out to me so much. As soon as I got to this chapter, his "don't you ever lock me out again" immediately popped up in my mind. I could recite the speech before even getting to it, aha, something about it is still so powerful to me.

Anyways, I can't thank you enough for writing TAC, it's truly a work of art and one of the best things to happen to the pokeani fandom since, well, ever. I love this fic and am so grateful for the work you put into it. Can't wait for the next installment!
JellyLollie chapter 6 . 8/7/2018
hi... just a minor thing... according to Bulbapedia, Robert is from Johto, not Hoenn
JellyLollie chapter 4 . 8/5/2018
even though I've read it many times, somewhere inside I still have that hope that story will happen differently this time. As of right now, I screamed in my head at Paul's "not tonight, Dawn" part. Also, the champions talking is always a delight.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/2/2018
Wait, wait, wait. Leaf thinks Paul has schizophrenia? I may not be a psychologist, but even I can tell that he shows no signs of schizophrenia. Depression, definitely, but not schizophrenia.
JellyLollie chapter 9 . 5/26/2018
So I'm reading tac and tac ii back and forth and I just had to go back to the scene between Paul, Iris and Leaf where Leaf yells PAUL JULIAN REBOLLEDO. That scene cracks me up everytime. Tac is amazing and can't not come back to it from time to time. every time I read a passage, I imagine those kind of "how well do you know [add thing]?" for the tac universe thinking about the little details that could become a question
Unformal Sorrelle chapter 32 . 3/25/2018
I really enjoyed this one too! :)
krsw1151 chapter 1 . 3/4/2018
Words cannot describe how utterly amazing this is... Seriously. This is probably the first time I have ever felt so emotionally invested and at a literal loss for words for a fanfic in my life. Pokemon was technically the first anime I ever watched so I have a strong attachment to it as a series and have read so much fanfiction for it its got to be unhealthy(lol). But I do have to say how incredible this story was and it is without a doubt the best Pokemon one out there. I am so insanely happy that you’re making another one and trust me if I could count the days down I would. Your writing is awe inspiring and it astounds me that you could a) make a story so perfect with so many characters that somehow all tie in together and b) keep all those characters in character and create a story that revolves around them all so fluently. It was simply perfection and am so happy you shared this one with us. Thank you for an amazing job well done and good luck with number 3!
Guest chapter 30 . 1/6/2018
Hey, think it's really cool, how you connected Pokerus to Mega Evolution to Heart Scales(made them more useful I have so many in SM/USUM, but need/can never find any in HGSS)
I looked for TR centered episodes and accidentally stumbled upon some unaired episodes, that mentions Giovanni being after a meteonite, yes I spelled that right. It's not meteorite, that's different. So anyways, the aforementioned Meteonite, becomes unstable then released something that increased PokeStats, but created an imbalance in nature. I for one, hope they mean pokemon natures, not trees and grass
(For your info, which you might already know, this all included, it was BW episodes 023-24)
Guest chapter 28 . 1/1/2018
Well (beep)
Now what?
I wanted Lance to kill Gary...
Poor Leafy...your characterization of her is the only one I can stand, and can actually like. Keep at it
Reminds me of this-
Although supposedly links don't work in reviews so...
https() watch?()vkc2PHQRQx-w
Remove all - ()
But in case it doesn't let you copy
Just go to youtube, the title is {Red and Leaf} she's just the shadow of a hero
And no it's not burningleafshipping
Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2017
Also quite cruel and cold...should be throw in sadistic? Down right insane, perhaps even analytic, hm what else...
Guest chapter 2 . 12/29/2017
Hm, Paul and Leaf make a serious team, they seem quite high alert...actually they have a lot of similarities...the only ones you could seem calculating enough to figure anything out among other stuff...
Sin Danimal chapter 32 . 12/21/2017
Great story
If you make a part 3 good luck I'll be rooting for ya
Sin Danimal chapter 17 . 12/20/2017
SAMPLe is evil
Guest chapter 8 . 11/19/2017
Ok, well after 8 chapters, I can just say I can't stand Leaf. I really can't lmao it's to the point that all I was hoping was that someone puts her in her place so that she can just shut up because it's so annoying seeing her pretending that she is better than everyone else. Leaf who was one of my faves from TAC, now is probably my least favorite. However, I will keep an open mind and see how everything turn out and if she can climb up the chart lmao I am still enjoying the fic. Even if Leaf rubs me the wrong way, there is no way it's affecting how much I like this story though. In other news, I am so happy Iris didn't let Leaf take control of everything and replied back!

Many things happen in this chapter. I like that we are getting flashbacks of Cilan and Iris! It's nice seeing how they interacted a few years ago, before getting married!

Finally, I wasn't expecting Paul to say that he wanted to break up with Dawn...I knew something wasn't going well, but I thought they would have a conflict before reaching this conclusion. I hope it's not the end of Ikari, because I like them together. But feel like it isn't yet.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/17/2017
I love that there are so many scenes focused on Iris, because I really love Iris. But it makes me feel bad that she is stuck in so much trouble! I really like how Paul is encouraging and helping her though. It's a really sweet detail.

Adalet entering the picture is interesting! I wonder what this will bring to the story. I feel like Adalet is the one that will be chosen, but I really don't know.

I also feel like Ritchie did a good thing refusing to be ref! I had a bad feeling when Leaf suggested it and I am glad that it didn't went that road. I still feel like Leaf is so cold lmao I really can't explain (Not that I am complaining!) Maybe I will understand more in the future.

Ash caring about Lileep and wondering if it's going to miss it's friends is so sweet and cute. Truly Ash! I am glad.
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