Reviews for The Ash Connection II: The Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You got me hook up since Book 1 and this, it's nearly perfect! I love the narratives how you portray the characters here like even if they are jus the minor ones, you give them some relevance in the story. And the wits that always make me laugh and the feels! Uggh there are parts that I tear up and cry. I can really feel your passion as a writer and a Pokemon fan pouring in the story. In addition, the best thing about here also is you made me fall in love with the pairings. Overall, I enjoy the story just like how I enjoy the first part. I dont think I can find another Pokemon fanfic that can really blow my mind like how this fanfic did to me. I'm looking forward for the third installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm rereading this for the first time since you finished it - the TAC series is still my favorite fanfic of all time, by the way - and Drew's speech in this chapter still sticks out to me so much. As soon as I got to this chapter, his "don't you ever lock me out again" immediately popped up in my mind. I could recite the speech before even getting to it, aha, something about it is still so powerful to me. Anyways, I can't thank you enough for writing TAC, it's truly a work of art and one of the best things to happen to the pokeani fandom since, well, ever. I love this fic and am so grateful for the work you put into it. Can't wait for the next installment! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi... just a minor thing... according to Bulbapedia, Robert is from Johto, not Hoenn |
![]() ![]() ![]() even though I've read it many times, somewhere inside I still have that hope that story will happen differently this time. As of right now, I screamed in my head at Paul's "not tonight, Dawn" part. Also, the champions talking is always a delight. |
![]() ![]() Wait, wait, wait. Leaf thinks Paul has schizophrenia? I may not be a psychologist, but even I can tell that he shows no signs of schizophrenia. Depression, definitely, but not schizophrenia. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm reading tac and tac ii back and forth and I just had to go back to the scene between Paul, Iris and Leaf where Leaf yells PAUL JULIAN REBOLLEDO. That scene cracks me up everytime. Tac is amazing and can't not come back to it from time to time. every time I read a passage, I imagine those kind of "how well do you know [add thing]?" for the tac universe thinking about the little details that could become a question |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this one too! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Words cannot describe how utterly amazing this is... Seriously. This is probably the first time I have ever felt so emotionally invested and at a literal loss for words for a fanfic in my life. Pokemon was technically the first anime I ever watched so I have a strong attachment to it as a series and have read so much fanfiction for it its got to be unhealthy(lol). But I do have to say how incredible this story was and it is without a doubt the best Pokemon one out there. I am so insanely happy that you’re making another one and trust me if I could count the days down I would. Your writing is awe inspiring and it astounds me that you could a) make a story so perfect with so many characters that somehow all tie in together and b) keep all those characters in character and create a story that revolves around them all so fluently. It was simply perfection and am so happy you shared this one with us. Thank you for an amazing job well done and good luck with number 3! |
![]() ![]() Hey, think it's really cool, how you connected Pokerus to Mega Evolution to Heart Scales(made them more useful I have so many in SM/USUM, but need/can never find any in HGSS) I looked for TR centered episodes and accidentally stumbled upon some unaired episodes, that mentions Giovanni being after a meteonite, yes I spelled that right. It's not meteorite, that's different. So anyways, the aforementioned Meteonite, becomes unstable then released something that increased PokeStats, but created an imbalance in nature. I for one, hope they mean pokemon natures, not trees and grass (For your info, which you might already know, this all included, it was BW episodes 023-24) |
![]() ![]() Well (beep) Now what? I wanted Lance to kill Gary... Poor Leafy...your characterization of her is the only one I can stand, and can actually like. Keep at it Reminds me of this- watch?vkc2PHQRQx-w Although supposedly links don't work in reviews so... https() watch?()vkc2PHQRQx-w Remove all - () But in case it doesn't let you copy Just go to youtube, the title is {Red and Leaf} she's just the shadow of a hero And no it's not burningleafshipping |
![]() ![]() Also quite cruel and cold...should be throw in sadistic? Down right insane, perhaps even analytic, hm what else... |
![]() ![]() Hm, Paul and Leaf make a serious team, they seem quite high alert...actually they have a lot of similarities...the only ones you could seem calculating enough to figure anything out among other stuff... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story If you make a part 3 good luck I'll be rooting for ya |
![]() ![]() ![]() SAMPLe is evil PLASMA e |
![]() ![]() Ok, well after 8 chapters, I can just say I can't stand Leaf. I really can't lmao it's to the point that all I was hoping was that someone puts her in her place so that she can just shut up because it's so annoying seeing her pretending that she is better than everyone else. Leaf who was one of my faves from TAC, now is probably my least favorite. However, I will keep an open mind and see how everything turn out and if she can climb up the chart lmao I am still enjoying the fic. Even if Leaf rubs me the wrong way, there is no way it's affecting how much I like this story though. In other news, I am so happy Iris didn't let Leaf take control of everything and replied back! Many things happen in this chapter. I like that we are getting flashbacks of Cilan and Iris! It's nice seeing how they interacted a few years ago, before getting married! Finally, I wasn't expecting Paul to say that he wanted to break up with Dawn...I knew something wasn't going well, but I thought they would have a conflict before reaching this conclusion. I hope it's not the end of Ikari, because I like them together. But feel like it isn't yet. |