Reviews for The Ash Connection II: The Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well congrats I'm happy for you. Honestly I still remember when you frist wrote the ash connection I was amazed on how everything fit perfectly. You amazed me further when you made a sequle I admit I lost track of it for a time but I do make it a habit to re read the ash connection on long rides. And I re read / finished reading this one finally and I must say this story or rather these stories you write Britten my darkest days and excited me ! Today was a not so good frist day of my last year of high school but finishing your wonderful story helped me smile today and not a two second smile a whole chapter worth ! Multiple times and I have no doubt that you will continue to do so Sincerely your most great full fan and reader Silvershihouin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Can't believe this is the end. What a plot twist! I can't believe I didn't see that coming lol. Well done well done. It's rare to see a story so focused on at least a dozen characters. While the pacing of the story can be a bit slow, the story itself gives the limelight to each character equally. That is a very difficult feat to accomplish, and yet, you did it effortlessly. Congrats again on finishing such a nice novel. I look forward to seeing what happens next for Ash and the gang! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was little short, but a fitting end. I love this series so much and I am a supporter of practically all the shippings. Maybe for the last story, you could place it eight or ten years or so after "The Rising." It could have the children of Ash and Misty, Iris and Cilan, May and Drew, Dawn and Paul and the others and how they deal with being the children of such famous people. Along the way, they could deal with things most kids like them go through like crushes, school, homework... and trying to save the world from a catastrophic event that could end all that they know and love ;-) Maybe an old foe of their parents returned or a whole new syndicate. |
![]() ![]() In the Trilogy, could you please add some of the characters in XY, other than Clemont, Serena and Bonnie. . . ? Example; Tierno, Shauna, Calem, Trevor and maaaaaybe Alain? (They're all in the anime, except Calem, and Alain is not in the games. Anyways, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should be really, really, proud of yourself. Thank you so much for sharing your beautiful writing with fellow Pokemon fans. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you tie up all the loose ends and finish on a warm and gentle note is absolutely amazing. I'd just wished there'd been more in terms of battle scenes but what's provided is quality stuff, so no complaints there. I'm looking forward to the final installment of the TAC trilogy as eagerly as the rate with which I've devoured the first two. One question that's still been pestering me that I sincerely hope you'll address: What about Silver?! Does his little fiasco with Leaf ever get resolved? I'm genuinely curious because it still seems rather bittersweet of a departure if you look at it from Ash's point of view. |
![]() ![]() I CANT WAIT FOR EVERYTHING TO COME NEXT! |
![]() ![]() YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! I love how this chapter ended. One of the best Pokemon stories. |
![]() ![]() How cute. |
![]() ![]() You go girl! |
![]() ![]() Yeah, he's dead. |
![]() ![]() YESSSS |
![]() ![]() You manage to make me laugh interesting in everybody in this Fanfiction. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! You are one of the best authors in the world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I can't believe it's finally finished! This story's wrapped up beautifully, but I guess I never expected anything less from you. The contests, the championship, and even a Turtwig for Paul...just wow. I'm happy to see that there's going to be more to this story. Some reforms have taken place since the Ash Connection, but the Napajian government still has a long way to go...I look forward to seeing what these people and their children will do next. Finally, thank you for bringing magic to the Pokemon universe. This series has long replaced canon for me. |