Awesome chapter here! Great start to the second book!

No Mega Evolution yet, that I can understand. You have to slowly build up the story and the powerlevel of a person, at ones fully powered is not fun. (But you know that already)

good chapter.
good if ash obtain all eveelution.
So for suicune, do you plan ash obtain the child when he come to new bark town?

My only issue there is that Sylveon isn't an evolution caused by a stone. It's an evolution caused by having high friendship and leveling while knowing a fairy move. While giving Cynthia the last of the non stone caused evolutions would have been fine, it would be better if it was done more in keeping to the actual evolution for the pokemon

Slyveon is a cool pokemon only thing is it is not a stone evolution, it evolves by knowing a Fairy type move and having great Affection for its trainer. Glad to see you continuing this story.

This is looking really good so far. The end was unexpected but awesome.

Can't wait until the next chapter.

Good Job.

nice first chapter poor brock still no luck with the lady's
will be fun to see witch lady yal pick for him

nice surprise with the slyveon wonder if ash will figure out what the gs ball is for

great chapter , Keep the good writing and hope for more updates soon and Really awesome story, can't wait to read more:)

Nice start!

Slyveon debut!

awesome!

A great opening chapter Kevin, keep up the good work and looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice chapter. Great as always.