eh?

sylveon doesn't evolve using a stone though...

You literally turned cinthia into a female cannon ash

Its grass type not plant

Riiiiiiggghhht hunter j can beat a legendary in a one on one battle

Your are a jerk to to destroy a person character and if you don't stop being a real big idiot I am going to kill you and make it so the world doesn't know you instead get from the king of the god and goddess god

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Great story

That’s...not how mega evolution works. One per round, and I’m pretty sure that’s cannon in the anime to. One mega per battle, if that Pokémon is traded out the mega stops, just like passing out (I think).
Still, good story, I enjoy it.

If someone slapped be I would slap them back. Ash wasn’t in the wrong, and I have to admit I really don’t like abusive relationship like that. I enjoy the story, but not the relationship. I’m sure it’ll improve later tho, otherwise it’s good story.

I don't think you understand how Mega-Evolution works. It can only be used once per battle, but Alain used it on both Lucario and Charizard. Thats just bs.

….so he'll win with legends... aw and here Im expecting him winning the league without legends...

cuz you delete the scenes... I just discovered their still a virgin...

he just gave him... another chance to capture a legendary pokemon did he?...

awww... no wonder there is no lime chapt... I still wanna read it though... pm it to me!

fck... so he can have hundred of wives... but the danger is... one of them die... everyone die? or just ash?