...FINALLY HE PUT THEM TO THE PRISON!...even though it wont be pernament

the pokemon battle is good...but sex scene... nope...

I thought he's smart?... get tired of TR and yet used full power flamethrower making them blast off... not use venusaur vine whip to capture them

I agree Ash was so close to winning in the Kaloas region

Ugh! Stop blasting them into the sky. You have access to Gengar, Mew, and Sabrina's Alakazam and Espion, ALL of which know hypnosis. Knock the three stooges out and let Jenny arrest them. Eventually Giovani will stop bailing them out, or better yet, they'll be denied bail for getting arrested again.

Oh well. I know it's supposed to be comic relief, but those 3 are my biggest complaint about the series (maybe tied with how his skills and pokemon's strength get reset every region). It's especially bad in Kalos and Alola where their "motto" has gotten so long it's practically a commercial break. WHY let them finish every time? By the word "devistation" the thunderbolt should be blasting them off. Just saying. I hate team rocket, even more than Paul's callous arrogance and how OP Hunter J is.

awesome chapter.

This chapter has dragon rash instead dragon rush made me laugh on a really rough day.

I started reading legend is born on monday now I'm done with johto journeys before i go into battle frontier i wanted to let you know I'm enjoying the reading and also if you were going to continue the storyline like i said i haven't started battle frontier yet so if its done great and i hope you with get to hoenn soon if not done then i will await the next chapter. Hope you keep writing I've been enjoying every chapter since the beginning of the storyline

I liked Alain...

just realized while rereading this chapter that you forgot to list 2 eeveelutions when professor oak talks about them... you forgot to mention the 2 from sinnoh glaceon and leafeon. just figured I'd point that out so you could maybe fix eventually

this entire chapter has been spelling the name wrong for Harrison's correct spelling is [Blaziken] not [Blazikin]

For some reason your disclaimer says "I do own Pokemon" in this chapter

Genial hv

HUmmmmmmm as ive seen in many fanfics is latias the 4th? or Bianca either one i hope

I’m noticing that you have not given the legendary birds any attention I would like to see them soon I hope I mean I get u don’t want to be to op but it seems the whole point is for ash to use them and they become apart of his family sooooo day so give them a day view lol love your story never stop writing