|Reviews for Family Portrait|
| GeneralDragon chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
Really good one shot. I've grown tired of all the sappy AAMR stories out there with them being the perfect couple. The affair really threw me through a loop there espically with Ako. Looking forward to reading some of your other work. Keep up the great work, and i'll keep on reading.
| Maia's Pen chapter 1 . 9/8/2005
WOW! DRAMATIC! You really impressed me with this one.
My heart was thudding away as I read.
I have to admit tho, that this made me smile a little:-"ASH KETCHUM! YOU'D BETTER APOLOGIZE!- _; Ash is always getting yelled at. . . .
The POV from the child was brilliant. This was VERY origninal - I never would have thought to write from theit child POV. GOOD FOR YOU! A realistic fic too.
| Arrow chapter 1 . 11/16/2002
-.-;; This was really good Jenn. Lol I read it because I liked the song and had no idea you were the author until the v. end (was wondering why it was so good and the writing was familar). Cute names too!
| 32-bit Mandarin Orange chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
OMG! THIS IS WEIRD! The SECOND I heard family portrait during the summer the for first time, a fanfic just sprung into my head-it was about Isyouna (my "Ash and Misty's daughter") having to witness them fighting, because it seemed that Ash and Misty would fight a even when they were married. So when I saw this I was like, whee, someone had the exact same idea as me! Great minds think alike, ne? I love it! It was cute, and I love the way you quoted the song but didn't just plop the words from the song in there. Keep writing!
| Enja lazy 1 chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
Wow, that was really, really good! I am serious! I have nothing more to say...
| Trish chapter 1 . 11/15/2002
Yes! Jenn's back writing again! This is how I would see Ash and Misty's relationship too. With two such strong willed personalities and Misty's hot temper and thin skin - married life would not be a bed of roses. Fighting is their 'thing' and always will be, amen. I feel sorry for Chloe and Ako - kids are always the ones to suffer when things like this happen. Very very well written and it flows so nicely. More fics from you! Bravo.