| Reviews for Unrealized Peacekeeper |
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   Hybridbabe chapter 13 . 7/24/2004 WHOA... THIS IS AMAZING, absolutely AMAZING DRD! WHO HO everything's just a twist on the original, and beyond anything that anyone could have hoped for! You've done a fantastic job with all of the characters, and given me a couple ideas for my own as well! You've certainly given me motivation for writing! Bravo, bravo, ENCORE! ENCORE! |
| olafur chapter 13 . 7/20/2004 Oh, wow! I was barely breathing when reading the last parts! PLEASE be quick to write the next one, please! |
| stonecold chapter 13 . 7/20/2004 Please don't stop writing this story. It keeps getting better and better. This is by far the best story I've ever read. |
| drberg chapter 13 . 7/19/2004 Great part, can't wait for more Chrition and Sun. How do they get together, how does he survive, how does he become the leader we see at the beginning of the story? Please update soon, Love to read more drb6969 |
| Bolo chapter 13 . 7/18/2004 Come on John! You can do it! The worst thing is the waiting, too much of it... but ahh when the update is here um goodness. |
| jonnyG chapter 12 . 7/15/2004 I really love this fiction, the only problem i can see with it is the fact it's not updated enough... |
| thecomputerroom chapter 12 . 7/6/2004 I challange you to write a story in which crichton and a time displaced moya meet up with a ship from earth. When that happens crichton finds out that not only was he shot through a wormhole but shot thousands of years in the future, to a point where humans are superior to the peacekeepers in everyway. (Technology wise and physically). Andrewjameswilliams writes a story called a journeys end, thats how advanced that humans should be because iam tired of the peacekeepers thinking that humans are inferior... |
| Hybridbabe chapter 11 . 6/5/2004 Did i mention that you're a genius! I think i forgot that part in my last review. Anyway, you're my role model on the perfect Farscape fan fiction, so i award you your own private Sparky award! *hands over the gold statuette of the Disposed Dominar* Congrats! I shall be using your fix as references in the future, and try to work on my own writing! You're very inspirational! |
| Hybridbabe chapter 12 . 6/5/2004 Holy mother of Hezmana, this fan fiction KICKS FRELLIN EEMA! I have to hand it to ya, you jsut blew my fan fic out of the water! I spent hours yesterday and about two hours today reading through the entire thing, from starting point to (so far) the ending point, and the results were astounding. Every single minute detail of how John is slowly but surely becoming a PK, and how lost he feels is put down perfectly, his personality exact and definite. It was nice to see Tauvo as well, because he never lasted longer than 500 microts in the series anyway! Your picture of Aeryn is finely tuned, capturing her spirit and gradual change from "PK to human" with beauty and grace. Even Scorpius, as horrible as he was to John throughout the entire series, has been given a new life in your fic! You've created a wonderland worthy of Farscape air-time, hands down! Your fan fic is descriptive and direct, taking the intricacies of the original plotlines and creating original masterpieces in their wake. You must right more; there is no way you can't stop now! PLEASE, write more! ASAP! I'm completely addicted, hook, line, and sinker! |
| Big D on a Diet chapter 12 . 5/16/2004 This is a great story. You've really captured who Crighton is and who he is becoming although I sure would like to see Chiana and find out what happened to D'argo. |
| Bolo chapter 12 . 4/16/2004 I was even starting to like Tauvo. John pissed is never good now the Scarrans better run. Glad for the update looking forward to more real soon. |
| kitty chapter 12 . 4/15/2004 Just started to read Farscape fic but i must say that your story is one of the best so far. Can't believe you killed Tauvo off thought especially by John's hand! He was my favourite character, you made me really care about him! Anyway excellent writing! |
| Cap'n Chryssalid chapter 12 . 4/15/2004 Great! Superbly characterized and thought through with a writing style that flows professionally: I sincerely hope you update as soon as possible. A fine story like this... it is a sad thing to leave unfinished. "I regret to inform you that your pilot is currently flying under the influence." *wipes away a tear* Hohoho! I'll remember that one! |
| Stone Cold chapter 12 . 4/14/2004 Wow. Great as usual. I check every day looking for an update. I really hope Taulvo isn't dead. I hope I hope. John needs a friend like him, and who knows what Crais will do to John. I am so very curious how John ends up a Captain. |
| Alltorian chapter 12 . 4/14/2004 Yey a new chapter, and a good one at that. Like how John's starting to transform into a Peacekeeper. Please keep up the good work. |