Reviews for Unrealized Peacekeeper
Darkman1 chapter 5 . 12/10/2002
Excellent and very intriguing. Highly enjoyable "what if" and I am anxiously waiting to see how we get from Point A' to Point B, assuming John & Aeryn are Point B.

Characters are dead-on and you have Aeryn and John nailed.

Great job
starkllr chapter 1 . 12/9/2002

I don't have much in the way of specific comments; I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far, it's extremely well-written and true to the show.

If there is one thing to single out, I'd say it's the way you really captured the "voices" of the characters, Crais probably most of all. I could hear the actors reciting your dialogue as I read.

The only complaint I have is that it stops. More! Soon! Now! More!
Guest chapter 5 . 12/8/2002
Really enjoying your story! Thanks for posting and looking forward to the next chapter.

Gwachaedir chapter 5 . 12/8/2002
Cool story so far. Very interesting plot, I've always liked AUs. I like that you give background into the pK way of life. Please continue to write. I'm putting this on my favorites list.
Layce74 chapter 4 . 12/6/2002
I'm loving this. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please don't drop the story.
KingOI chapter 4 . 11/30/2002
Damn Good So Far.
Bolo chapter 4 . 11/29/2002
Nice, cant wait to see John start taking command and coming up with strange ideas.
JessicaRabbit chapter 3 . 11/29/2002
I am enjoying this. Keep writing and posting!
mary chapter 3 . 11/26/2002

This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Bolo chapter 3 . 11/24/2002
Liking this alot! But If I remember right, no one knew or very few knew John was human by the time he took command.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/23/2002
Great stuff keep up the good work! :-)
Domino chapter 3 . 11/22/2002
This is great! I love it. Please keep writing more. You write it, I'll read it!
Domino chapter 1 . 11/17/2002
I don't remember if I left a comment when I read this, but I had to make sure. I thought this was great! Please write some more!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/16/2002
Wow great story so far I really like it keep up the good work!

Steely AKA GrimReaper
Domino chapter 2 . 11/16/2002
Great! Great! I love it. I love AU stories. Keep writing. Love it!
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