Excellent and very intriguing. Highly enjoyable "what if" and I am anxiously waiting to see how we get from Point A' to Point B, assuming John & Aeryn are Point B.

Characters are dead-on and you have Aeryn and John nailed.

Great job

Brilliant!

I don't have much in the way of specific comments; I've thoroughly enjoyed this story so far, it's extremely well-written and true to the show.

If there is one thing to single out, I'd say it's the way you really captured the "voices" of the characters, Crais probably most of all. I could hear the actors reciting your dialogue as I read.

The only complaint I have is that it stops. More! Soon! Now! More!

Really enjoying your story! Thanks for posting and looking forward to the next chapter.

Maury

Cool story so far. Very interesting plot, I've always liked AUs. I like that you give background into the pK way of life. Please continue to write. I'm putting this on my favorites list.

I'm loving this. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please don't drop the story.

Damn Good So Far.

Nice, cant wait to see John start taking command and coming up with strange ideas.

I am enjoying this. Keep writing and posting!

Hi!

This is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Liking this alot! But If I remember right, no one knew or very few knew John was human by the time he took command.

Great stuff keep up the good work! :-)

This is great! I love it. Please keep writing more. You write it, I'll read it!

I don't remember if I left a comment when I read this, but I had to make sure. I thought this was great! Please write some more!

Wow great story so far I really like it keep up the good work!

Steely AKA GrimReaper

Great! Great! I love it. I love AU stories. Keep writing. Love it!