Reviews for Memories in Progress
Isabella GL chapter 1 . 10/16/2014
Great sequel! I loved the bit about "Heart and Soul" and also the conversation between Holly and Ross. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Great first chapter and I hope there are many more chapter's to come.
Cynthia chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Yay! So glad you're back! And so happy to see Jack's first birthday. Love that Holly and Roger are happy, adjusting to the community (and the community to them). Also funny to see Blake coming in at the wrong moment ;-)
PriscillaPal chapter 1 . 9/11/2014
There is a lot in this story that rings so true to life. I loved it when Jack pronounced Maureen and Blake's names. I think kids as young as Jack, listen to someone's name being pronounced, and then say it as close to what they think it is. 'Bake' and 'Moe', is pretty close!

I was also touched by the nice gifts Adam and Barbara sent. They are just as guilty of spoiling baby Jack as his parents.

But best of all, it was good to see more than a few people make the effort to drop off gifts, even though they've had their problems with either Holly or Roger, over the years. It was like differences were put aside and Jack was the true focus. It was nice to read.