Reviews for Naruto, Son of the Heavenly Rabbit
arianamax177 chapter 1 . 3/20
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LuminouShadowAlt chapter 1 . 3/1
wtf is this...

lmao feel like some 12 year wrote this
Fabricimo chapter 1 . 11/10/2024
Are you going to finish this fic or not? It's one of my favorites, and I've been waiting for years for it to conclude.
DeleteIt chapter 7 . 10/22/2024
You get chakra, you get chakra, fuck it EVERYONE GETS CHAKRA. dumb ass author i swear to god shit got trash so fast and there's still 34 chapters left... yeah fuck all that
BrosEgoIsHurt chapter 4 . 10/22/2024
"No harem" makes no effort so godds cant just fuck who ever they want when they want. Bros double standards are crazy. Go ahead and say " iTs My StOrY dOnT liKe It FuCk OfF" you posted this to the internet you expect no one to say shit?
LMFAOOOOO chapter 3 . 10/22/2024
"I have no wish to just flaunt my power in a spar" the next chapter he does exactly that instead of explaining
TheGoodDoctor13 chapter 3 . 8/10/2024
This story is ok and all but I really can't get into it. It's written like one of those old school "Uchiha elite" type of Naruto fanfics and I just can't bring myself to continue unfortunately
Twilight-Lloyd chapter 33 . 6/5/2024
I love Ella. She’s yet another example of neurodivergent behavior. Having an eidetic memory sounds incredibly useful, but it means a perfect recall of absolutely EVERYTHING you’ve experienced, including trauma, and not always willingly either. Her semi-understandable babbling makes perfect sense for a person who could, at any moment even mid-conversation, be violently pulled into a memory they can’t escape from.
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 40 . 2/18/2024
I really thought Percy would get Samehada.
Amargi'sNodachi chapter 1 . 2/17/2024
Interesting how you went from harems are weird to giving Naruto a large harem in your Xover where you made him a GoD
mgologurski03052002 chapter 1 . 1/15/2024
Hi, I'm Brazilian and I wanted to tell you that I really liked your story and I would like to know if I could use it to adapt it to my taste with your permission, please?
DeltaWolf2038 chapter 1 . 9/9/2023
authorsingle pairing, not harem"

fanfictionNaruto. U, Hestia,Hera)
Guest chapter 40 . 8/25/2023
I dont believe the Thalia x Reyna works very well. First, i dont believe they interacted much before the quest. I dont believe thalia would catch feelings that fast. Their romances feels so what rushed and out of place. Also i dont believe Annabeth would be okay with this. In this story Thalia is very loyal as shown by her refusesal to forget that she has a girlfriend. So the fact that it feel like she is cheating with Reyna doesnt sit well with me. I also dont see why Thalia would be impressed by Reyna seeing as she can beat her with her eyes closed. Idk this 3 way ship feels wrong to me. When u rewrite i beg to just stay Annabeth x Thalia and leave Thalia x Reyna for a different story.
Juno Schnee Link chapter 24 . 8/12/2023
technically yes in this continuity he is
mastermaniac195 chapter 10 . 7/20/2023
I'm on ch10
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