|Reviews for On a Pale Horse|
| Dezzi95 chapter 13 . 10/18
Can't belevie he just suggested to gift GIFT Haryy Bellatrix! Lol that was so funny
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/15
hi, i dont know if you will read this. ive read the entirety of this story and i have to say it is amazing. its better than most paper books ive read. your style is what i would want mine to be like if i ever actually follow through and write something to share with others. your style of humour and energy conveyed in your writing points to someone i could relate to haha. if this ever finds you i would like to say thank you.
regards - an anonymous reader
| Anon chapter 1 . 10/15
Mate, you dead?
| AquilaCinereo chapter 17 . 10/13
omg this story is so fucking hilarious I cannot
| Thrushsong k'Varis chapter 17 . 10/12
XD couldn't stop laughing for the first part of this chap
| freetre chapter 25 . 10/8
I'm loving your super supportive Ron! And his instantly knowing that Death was Harry. His freaking out and physically trying to check if his Harry was okay was adorable.
| Baleygr chapter 17 . 10/8
I'm sorry, but I had to write this when I read your AN at the end of the chapter. No, being brainless does not make you a zombie. It does, however, make you a politician.
| Satet chapter 7 . 10/6
Like the artificial flavor coconut? Or are we talking coconut milk? Or like straight crack open a coconut and start chomping it? Plus there are many different types of the artificial flavoring ranging from the sugar ratio, other mixed flavors , etc etc. So many possibilities of coconut. Personally I like the type of 'coconut' flavoring in Almond(lol) Joy. Also this ice cream parlor just around the block makes some kick-ass 'coconut' flavored ice cream but it doesn't really taste like coconut. There are also some more technical problems with labeling it tasting like coconut because just like how I could perceive the color red the same as you perceive blue your coconut may taste completely different to you than it does to me. Hell I could be eating an apple and it taste like charcoal to me but like a orange to you. So yeah. I have no idea why I wrote all of this amymore... I am so going to sleep.
| Satet chapter 1 . 10/6
They done fucked up about as much as theoretically possible. Like seriously the concept of death is even more eternal than the concept of life because whatever lives will spend a lot more time being dead than alive.
| Claire Aozora chapter 25 . 9/29
Neaaaaaattttttt! I want nexxxxttttttt! (But I can be patient, please gather your mood first :)
And because I think I need to do it, here my yell to the world : I am following this! Totally!
| MagicEater chapter 25 . 9/28
Like you assured a previous reader, if we were to have our genders swapped, I beg of you, in hyperbole, to have me bare your children; the genes of such brilliant creativity must be allowed to continue, and I would be, in the context of this joke of exaggeration that is intended to highlight my admiration, honored to carry such biology to term. I strongly urge you to consider such a course of action with all the gravitas it is honestly due.
Now that the humor is out of my system, well done! The characterization of Ron and Hermione, the interactions of The Two Harry's, all that has been done with Death? Marvelous! Simply marvelous! While I would love for more of a good thing, I can understand if there have been difficulties in continuing such a story, regardless of how much it might disappoint me to wait so long, when it has been so long already; take your time, there is simply no rushing quality art.
| MagicEater chapter 1 . 9/27
I'm loving how the fool is, albeit unknowingly, performing The Rite of Ashkente! Onward, to chapter 2!
| Nonyaarb chapter 13 . 9/23
LOL. That was fucking glorious!
| Nonyaarb chapter 1 . 9/22
OMG. This is good
| DanielHimura chapter 25 . 9/22
If Dumbledore thinks Harry is exaggerating about how the Dursleys treat him, how about transform him into Harry's form, and replace him in the past growing up without being able to tell anyone, or even use magic. See how he likes it.