Reviews for On a Pale Horse
bkjar chapter 25 . 7/15/2021
Love this Ron!
Guest chapter 25 . 7/9/2021
Wow, I normally don't read anything under 100k words (usually cause their unfinished, like this one :'.But this was a great book, and I must say I enjoyed this portrayal of Ron alot, seems like 90% of HP Fanfiction has Ron being an Idiot, a minion of Dumbledore,or Both, and I've been quite riddled with disdain for Ron the last like two years, but this Ron Interlude made me love Ron as Harry's friend, I wish more stories were written with Ron and Hermione being actual great friends and intelligent wizards/witches in their own ways.
yourmostdevoted chapter 25 . 7/8/2021
read the last two chapters on here and seriously this story is such a fucking delight *.*
kayleneproctor94 chapter 25 . 7/5/2021
I simply adore this story! Everything is so exciting and different! I love how you write the characters, it is gripping and thrilling! This ron interlude was also spectacular! He is always portrayed so one dimensional and stupid that this was super refreshing! Overall I think this is one of the most interesting fanfictions I have ever read (which is a ton)! Can't wait to see an update!
Jimbocous chapter 24 . 6/29/2021
Thanks for a great read so far. Sure hope you find your way back to this at some point. Much mayhem remains unexplored!
DarkBan chapter 25 . 6/26/2021
Beautiful story, author! :)
DarkBan chapter 5 . 6/26/2021
Pfffffffffff
That review respose tho! hahahahaahaha
Loving the story so far :)
Guest chapter 25 . 6/20/2021
I absolutely LOVE this story, it is a wonderful take on the MoD!Harry AU. Normally when authors write MoD!Harry they make him extremely dark too fast or they include a lot of Ron bashing. I hope you haven’t abandoned this story as it is wonderful and creative, it is easily one of my favorite Harry Potter fanfics. Thank you for blessing the world with this and I hope you one day continue this.
Gag's.boennec chapter 25 . 6/14/2021
This storie is amazing!
Please tell me you did not abandon it!
Anyway, you're a great writer, thanks for sharing your work with us mere mortals.
I hope everything is good in your life and that you find as much joy (and more) as you have given me with that wonderful masterpiece!
Guest chapter 25 . 6/11/2021
Oh I like this Ron. People always make him super evil or something. I mean Harry and Hermione can be paired despite a good Ron.
hplemonpersona chapter 25 . 6/8/2021
I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THIS AU
Nopes chapter 23 . 5/31/2021
But what kind of apples would Petunia's soul taste like? Red Delicious? Granny Smith?
M.T. Page chapter 25 . 5/26/2021
thank you for writing this and I look forward to when you get the chance to write more. regardless I hope you are doing well.
diamondgod77777777 chapter 25 . 5/23/2021
Wow! This is... A genuinely likable Ron. I gotta give you kudos for that.
Detsella Morningdew chapter 25 . 5/19/2021
I love it when Ron is used properly.

Trust me, I understand people who bash Ron. In early books, he had flaws, but he was a real person, and he really seemed to be a good friend. And he was Harry's window into the common wizard's thinking. But not only did he not get used very well in plot points in later books, the movies would often outright add "comic relief" parts, or straight up give his accomplishments to Hermione. (Which, I mean, Hermione is great, but still. Not at the expense of another character.)
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