interesting chapter I beg you to put in the harem kushina

excellent start please kushina makes the harem she's my favorite

I liked the first chapter, please kushina in the harem she is technically not related biologically to naruto so please put it

Awesome, this story is very original and so hilarious, they way you put the character's roles as well personalities were well done, I love Kushina and I'm glad that she was add on the fic, is very funny how she acts like a male Isshin with the shrine, why no one ever thought of that? and Naruto's reputations as a crime boss and harem king is adds more clazy moments for our favorite blond, anyway still it was a nice start now we must see how far you get it, so anyway good job and hope you can update soon.

This is interesting but please keep the harem on manageable levels. It's better to have the romance well developed instead of simply throwing every girl at Naruto.

I also agree with what the previous reviewer said about Naruto characters being suitors with eventual beat downs and talk-no-jutsu convincing them to stop and let Lala marry for love..

Please update as soon as possible

Well it's interesting and nice if Naruto has his Cannon Chakra skills and abilities

i really like this concept im interested to see where you take this story.

I don't know whether to envy or feel sorry for naruto. His adopted mother has a son complex, the school nurse teases the hell out of him, The school's biggest female pervert has a crush on him, he's now engaged to the alien princess of the galaxy...ugh! poor sap. Anyway this is pretty good I hope you continue. Also will this maybe be a harem story?

Simply one word: Awesome!

It would have been nice to make Rito into Riko. But can't wait for more.

heheh hes gona end up with kushina in his harem this is gona be hilarious

Awesome start, though maybe as some of the fiances or the assassins they hired, they can be some Naruto characters like Neji or Gaara that Naruto won over and they will become his brothers in war/battle or generals when he rules. I always felt that Rito was missing some allies that could stand by his side, especially male ones since they are always women. You could even have them be aliens of some worlds as they do have different abilities. Can't wait for the next update.

An all right start. Not a fan of the incest with Kushina though.