Please tell me when will this story be out, I really want to hear how the story goes.

I like it, I look forward to reading the rest of this story. Thank you for taking time to write this.

You could try make up the rate of this story to teen so maybe that will give you more freedom do write

Update please

Proof read one sentence at a time, as it will be easier to spot spelling or grammatical errors.. or as my college professor drilled into my brain.. please edit carefully

A very interesting concept, and a very good read.
I look forward to reading more.

I hate you you need to write more please I can't stand the suspense its killing me your story is just too good

Please, just go google up Online Spell Checker, copy paste everything in your story there, press Check, copy paste your story onto fanfiction again. Just please! It’ll take only 2 mins max!

This is a very good story please write more!

Hopefully you come back to this story because it is so very well done.

this is a fantastic story! is there anybody continuing it?

you got 'solely' right but 'received' wrong - just reverse the 'i' and the 'e'. 'accidentally', 'exceptional', 'intervening', 'receive', 'rythm', 'privileges', 'mentioned', [Ron's], 'waited', 'removed' would be better than 'subtracted' here, 'to look' isn't necessary. hope this helps!

is this ended here?
I enjoyed much to read this writings and feel sad to stop halfway.
good style and description
enjoyed much in reading about dragon realms.
is anything after chapter 17?

Did Harry and Hermione ever visit the Wolfards?

Harry can't see the creatures that pull the carriages?