| Reviews for After the Chamber - Lords and Ladies |
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   Korval chapter 3 . 2/3/2015 Howdy! Great story and very enjoyable so far... Most multi-relationship stories range from poor to horrible, but every once in a while a jewel is found amongst the muck... Most harem stories focus on the sexual aspects and ignore or downplay the character interactions, which (IMHO) is what makes these situations fascinating... Everything from the personal dynamics of the women (do they get along, how do they resolve jealousy/conflict), parental dynamics (especially Muggle parents), to the societal dynamics. The tension that the girls face as they wrestle with the advantages/disadvantages of the decision to be part of this complex relationship is also compelling, especially for a character as intelligent, complex, and opinionated/forceful as Hermione. I look forward to seeing how the characters develop, how they resolve dynamics, and how they explain things to the parents... I also very much hope you continue to minimize, downplay the sexual side and continue to focus on the character interactions... Thanks for sharing and look forward to more! -Korval |
| pinky9292 chapter 6 . 2/2/2015 Brilliant so far |
| HOLLOWTGH chapter 6 . 2/1/2015 I'm loving this story so far, I'm not a fan of APWBD since I think he is a manipulator but I like how you've made him in this story, its refreshing. Ron I've never liked and never will so I'd rather he be bashed but IDM the odd story where he's ok. And I really can't wait for Harry/Daphne times now with this curse that on her, once they get close its gonna be so fluffy that I'm already chocking on it! I can't wait. Keep up the great work. |
| sanabalis chapter 6 . 2/1/2015 Awesome story! Please write more! |
| rb2312 chapter 6 . 1/21/2015 Great chapter Like how harry got the weasleys to accept some help and when gred and forge find out he is the son of prongs, their asteem for his pranking skills will go through the roof. Looks like ginny has gotten over her shyness around harry. love the idea about daphne having a split personallity. Don't think i have seen that before. Really hope sirius gets cleared by the end of the year. also hope daphne and perhaps some of her friends join harry's circle of friends. can see astoria maybe becoming good friends with ginny as they are in the same year. Maybe luna too. |
| Benji-C chapter 6 . 1/20/2015 Good story so far. I do have a question though. Dumbledore told them that there was now way aroud the law without Merlin's keystone. Why is Hermione looking for legal loopholes instead of searching for refrences to the location of Merlin's keystone? If she could find that then she could change the magic enforceing this law. Am I missing something? |
| imgonnadie chapter 6 . 1/20/2015 Excellent chapter |
| digbygreen chapter 2 . 1/19/2015 Explain to Hermione that the Laws of Magic are like the Law of Gravity. It is a universal constant. You have to leave the planet to make a change. |
| herart chapter 6 . 1/18/2015 Good story so far. I wonder what'll happen next. |
| serenityselena chapter 6 . 1/18/2015 interesting revelations... can't wait to read more :) |
| rmiser1994 chapter 6 . 1/17/2015 awesome story so far! cannot wait to read more! . |
| Lucien Naviaux chapter 6 . 1/17/2015 Really good story, I have actually by passed this one like 3 times, lol and I'm kinda glad I did cause I would have picked it up at like Chp 3 and it would probably b killing me to wait for more, which kinda is now |
| duskrider chapter 6 . 1/17/2015 interesting job with the split personality curse |
| jabarber69 chapter 6 . 1/16/2015 Hey been reading this story off an on for last couple of days, when I get the chance to that is...Just have to say...WOW, WoW, wOw, wow! OUTSTANDING story and so well written too...love the whole concept and that honor dept thingy came out of no where and to give moRon...err ron his granddad shares in the chudley canons was little too much maybe!? but hey it is your story...you do know that ron will probalby blow thru those shares and the money from them or loose them by overspending... anyway definitely gonna keep an eye out for the next update... |
| trispectrum chapter 6 . 1/16/2015 Good to see a new chapter. Also interesting to see the cause of Daphne's behaviour being revealed. Interestingly, Harry cannot know oif this in order to cure her. Also good to see Harry recognising and operating according to magic and tradition in relation to the Weasleys. Dumbledore as a lawyer was unexpected. Also good to see you being Sirius into the story - I wonder how far you will replicate canon in relation to this thread. I hope you bring them together reasonably quickly - Sirius could provide useful guidance in relation toi Harry's heritage and his reaction to multiple marriages would be entertaining. Looking forward to the next update. |