Reviews for After the Chamber - Lords and Ladies |
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ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 2 . 9/23/2014 Great that Harry is thinking about his future and has his friends to back him up. Thanks for sharing! |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 9/23/2014 That was a lot of information that Harry is going to have to attempt to understand. Thanks for sharing! |
Jarjaxle chapter 2 . 9/23/2014 No Jealous Ron? Yes, now this story has even more potential because you left usual ROn bashing people give stories like this out. Very good. Getting annoyed in that particular Bashing and overused bashing too. Hermione's reaction was totally on the Spot and liked how Ron was more accepting and understanding about the situation because his Wizard background. Either marry or break the VERY THING, that makes Magic, "The" MAGIC. Yep, not very much recommended. Loved tough Malfoy's reaction! XD Ron's family may have lost their Title and Money, but still higher in Social Standing? XD Just Dessert for 2 years of bulling and insulting! Loved the ending. keep up your good work . |
Ghul chapter 2 . 9/23/2014 So far so good I really don't know what to expect one thing bugs me and sadly this isn't something you did but jk why does Hermione stutter voldmort she didn't grow up in the magic world she had no one to pick that up from she hasn't even met him yet to be afraid of him personaliy I think his named has to be cursed that's the only way for that to make sense it would be cool if you came up with reason in your fic why everyone scared to say his name even people who never heard of him |
25 Baam chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 AWESOME. MAGNIFIC. PERFECT. I am wating for the next and please continue soon, this story is awseome. See You. |
yuiop chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 Nice' |
yuiop chapter 1 . 9/22/2014 Nicek |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 Please no cliche ice queen Daphne. I'd rather have one that only speaks in jive or has some other crippling character flaw. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 I've just come across your work, and I am deeply enjoying your assorted fics. That said, I noticed two minor issues in this chapter: At one point, you refer to Ron as Roan, and use moist instead of most. |
FreeTraderBeowolf chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 I see you went with a good and kind Dumbledore. So far this is very cute and light hearted. Since year three is approaching can we expect it to strart turning darker and serious? |
Penny is wise chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 Awesome chapter. |
whatweareafreaidof chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 This is a intresting start and I like that Harry had 4 years to get Ingaged. So he does have time to get to know them. And also grow powerful Don't make him to strong. Like end of 3 year could be as strong as a strong 6 year As for Ron. I hope he does not end up alone, with no friends. As Harry spending. All his time with his girl. And be nice if he grow stronger, He got a lot better in canon. And even did well with da so he could be a powerful wizard. |
ArthurShade chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 very very nice |
notmeeither chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 Usually when I see the phrase "Most Ancient and Noble House of (whatever)", I'll stop reading immediately and never go back to it. This story seems a little more interesting than most, so I will give it a try |
major wallace chapter 2 . 9/22/2014 awesome |