| Reviews for After the Chamber - Lords and Ladies |
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   ariel stormcloud chapter 2 . 9/21/2014 great story |
| Krazyfanfiction1 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014 amazing chapter as always. hmm...will the snake show up later? and lets see..Hermione is probably going to be one of the wives, and if my memory serves, Ginny is a pueblood virgin, so that leaves one more... keep up the good work as always |
| Penny is wise chapter 1 . 9/19/2014 Awesome first chapter. |
| Silent Magi chapter 1 . 9/16/2014 I feel that this is a good start, though there are some points in which Harry is off model, but that is possibly my interpretation of the character, so I'm hoping you'll forgive me my reluctance to embrace the story as accurate to canon. I appreciate that you had him hesitant to offend the goblin nation and asking questions to the effect of negating that. That is a nice touch that most will skip when they're writing about Harry assuming roles of lordship and political powers. Thank you for doing so. I'm hoping to see more from you soon, and eager to see more. |
| Meck Viking chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 A good opening. Looking forward for more. |
| DukeBrymin chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 Intriguing beginning, looking forward to more. |
| Akira Stridder chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 not a bad start! |
| anarion87 chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 nice so far |
| starboy454 chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 excellent start |
| god of all chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 Interesting premise. Should be interesting to see where this goes. |
| NcJhSkJ9LD chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 You fell into the same mistake many keep making in such HP stories...Harry does not speak and act like his 12 year old canon self. This is WAYYY OOC. If you intended to make Harry's character different from canon, you MUST provide adequate backstory on WHY he is different from canon. Otherwise, as far as this chapter is concerned, this is not Harry Potter, but an OC that looks like him and shares his name. |
| lordamnesia chapter 1 . 9/14/2014 Rofl, the common trope of this is that Harry discovers it and uses it to his advatage. I really like how you are turning that around, that it's being forced on him! Keep up the great work! |
| Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 mmmmmmmm welll, its cool |
| davycrockett100 chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 awesome |