Reviews for A Dark Lords Rising
xNaruHina chapter 6 . 11/5
The Riddle family is not related to the Malfoy family. Tom was never part of the Malfoy family nor was he ever disowned from it. Why would Harry ever have a thing for Susan Bones when he has already expressed an interest in Daphne and Daphne said she was not averse to kissing him in the least?
Guest chapter 7 . 11/3
IIEarlGreyII chapter 35 . 10/30
This was just . . . I mean it was so terrible I am shocked. How can a person write so much about Harry Potter and not know how Quidditch is spelled! I thought it was a typo are first but, nope, that's how they spell it. The
language is so poor it goes beyond just typos, and sometimes I really couldn't tell what was going on. Coninuity errors abound, and the story messes with how magic works way too often. But mostly my issue is that the story is confusing to follow and just doesn't make sense. The entire second year was trash. Too often the author does something to try to shock us, but it is done so poorly that it is just anticlimactic or confusing. It is really sad because the general idea is really great, it's just that someone else had to write it instead. I can not recommend it.
EgoTrip73 chapter 35 . 10/23
Just found your story and basically binge read it. Great job. Definitely kept me entertained.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/18
Please do a rewrite of this just to fix the grammatical errors. The premise, characterization, and plot was pretty good but the poor English killed it for me... Also, check for continuity errors such as the Daphne multiple wife thing that many reviewers are pointing out
Alechaos Ogigio 2 chapter 35 . 10/16
Loved the story from beginning to end, except for a couple chapters in middle where it seemed to stagnate a bit. Definitely in my top 10 HP stories though
Fumbls chapter 35 . 10/9
Good story, sad to see you run out of steam at the end. Was hoping to see a bit more but im fine with how it ended.
ficreader4925 chapter 35 . 9/29
Fun little story. Main downside is the crappy use of English throughout the story. Please reread your sentences, or get a beta to do it for you.
Draco Grey chapter 35 . 9/27
Thank you so much for the story:)
Draco Grey chapter 34 . 9/27
Thank you so much for this story! I appreciate your hard work!
Draco Grey chapter 29 . 9/27
Congrats on a successful Lemon lol
Draco Grey chapter 28 . 9/27
Great chapter and great choice on pairings!
Draco Grey chapter 26 . 9/27
Another brilliant chapter!
Draco Grey chapter 25 . 9/27
This story is absolutely brilliant! never stop writing haha

~Draco Grey
DreaminginGreyscale chapter 28 . 9/21
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