|Reviews for Dancing in the dark|
| fairlead chapter 3 . 11/16/2014
/has an idea
You should have someone get a little mad and he have them transform a little bit! I'm not trying to force you though!
/I can't review twice on chapter 4 D:
| fairlead chapter 4 . 11/1/2014
I love AUs like this! It's a great idea, but the chapters a a tad short. I'm not forcing you to lengthen the chapters, but they might seem longer and be easier to read is you split those giant paragraphs into smaller ones.
| Last Alice chapter 3 . 9/29/2014
This is waaaaaaaaaaay easier to read...Awesome! Just wondering, did you say what Byakuya was? Hope you update soon XD
| Last Alice chapter 2 . 9/29/2014
Grimmjow is awesome ;P
| Last Alice chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
I'm interested and its pretty good so far. Just one tip: try separating it into paragraphs so its easier to read :)
| KazumaKaname chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Walls of text are painful to read.