Reviews for Fate's Gamble: Round Two
Guest chapter 25 . 7/6
Aww i wanted more ... I do hope you keep this up
dragonfighter11 chapter 25 . 7/6
Can we expect to see your Reinforced series be continued and finished?
The Hand of Section XIII chapter 1 . 6/28
People of Fanfiction, the man below me IS NOT ME! I would never say anything so baseless and stupid! To the author, I'm sorry I dragged you into this, if you see my name in black text, that's not me, it's some dastard pretending to be me. To everybody else, I'm actually pretty nice in my reviews, but this Fake XIII? Isn't me.
The Hand of Section XIII
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27
Good evening I am also an author here, The Hand of Section XIII. While I am not able to login at the moment, I am willing to give you the top 10 reasons why your fic is not that good.

1 to 10 in order:


Browse my account if you want pointers. Good night!
NicksterraIsBetterThanYou chapter 25 . 6/18
"I'm pretty sure he's responsible for several things we got the blame for, like the custard tsunami, eh?"

Sirius smile fell from his face. This was why he couldn't stay here, even if he yearned for James, Lily, and the other friends he'd made at Hogwarts as a student.

He didn't remember a custard tsunami incident, just like several other pranks and memories James had mentioned beforeā€¦

Yeah, that whole exchange fucked me up, and I don't know why. I guess that's what 5 years of writing practice does.

I just blazed through this entire 1M word story in the last week. I enjoyed it, and could definitely see as you improved.

I'll be reading your other stuff too, I should think.
nathnathn chapter 19 . 6/16
just been rereading this
And got a thought of dream or Destruction and GladOS from portal.
nero99 chapter 3 . 6/4
Fun story!
Scribe of Death chapter 25 . 6/2
I have followed rour Fate's Gamble series since the very begining. These Fanfics are honestly some of my favourites. They've made me laugh and and made me cry. They have inspired my own wrighting so much that it is almost astounding. They have shown me that even when a good author struggles, they still manage to finish the chapter. I will truly miss these stories. Thank you, and goodbye.
The Criticist chapter 25 . 5/29
I know you said you wouldn't do it, but can you please do 1 more fates gamble story. This time have him the Percy Jackson universe with the hunters and Artemis. Please
Efloresco chapter 25 . 5/29
Hahaha, hard story to write eh?

Yeah I can see that, there's not really a goal to strive for after all. The only real direction you can take with it would be a slice of life one, which could be fun.

You could essentially rewrite any story you want using this as a template though, if you make it so that Harrys values shift slightly from "self improvement" to "finding novel things", maybe with an added aspect of acquiring knowledge native to the worlds and finding things for his sould world. Gandalf didn't exactly reveal his power level to the fellowship, but he was their guide nonetheless. Harry could benlike that to any world he visits.
coronadomontes chapter 25 . 5/24
good fanfic
Kithrin chapter 25 . 5/24
what ever happened to Voldies 'holy bomb?' it would've at least given him SOME satisfaction that he hurt harry, before harry killed him.
XxXSterek123XxX chapter 25 . 5/14
Do you plan on continuing Harry's adventures?
Jack Inqu chapter 25 . 5/12
It has indeed been a while. I think I've been here since the beginning, and while I've enjoyed the story, I would agree that it's best to move onto something else. What that may be, I look forward to finding out.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.
T-B-R chapter 25 . 5/8
about time this is over, whew, I got the feeling you started running out of ideas for this story, it was a good run while it lasted though.
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