Reviews for Not The Hero |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Man, this story's amazing. Discord is written beautifully and I particularly enjoy how he overlooks the element of selfishness, there's some delicious buildup and I'd love to see the payoff. Keep up the amazing writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Trixie just got called ‘Street Preformer,’ which everyone knows is slang for hookers and prostitures. If only Diamond Tiara knew or maybe it’s better she doesn’t know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Chrissy's interlude was fun, love Discord's ideas for new Elements of Disharmony, and the descriptions of Maud were hilarious. Ok, time for dessert aka Elements of Opposition. Oh, I think I forgot to mention before, whatever reasons you had for posting this apple basket full of Discord stories for us in January coincidentally works out well for me. Best. Early. Birthday Present. Ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This one was a ride! And uh oh, I just got feelings about that last sentence. Maybe I'm wrong, I won't try too hard to guess 9 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oooh it's getting good again; another great chapter Rogers! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, is Protection actually Selfishness? Also, yes, Sombra is a very scary pony. Another marvelous chapter. And a creepy umbra backstory. Plus an update for Last Draconequus too! You spoil us so! *skips off the read TLD* |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Oh my God, is that secretly the Element of Protection? It would fit! Aaaaahhhhh |
![]() ![]() Hey! You're back! Now don't leave again, I've been stuck reading cliches since the last time you went and I really, really don't want to read anymore self inserts. |
![]() ![]() Continued excellence. thanks for the update :) |
![]() ![]() You're back! Yaay! Poor Discord, first he had to explain the extra crispy tan joke, then you had to explain his rambling-yet-amusing discourse on mana a mana for him. Considering the show's as-yet-unused Chekhov's Gun with Sombra's broken horn, I think Discord's idea that death won't stop Sombra from causing trouble is right on the money. Bits? Hey, Discord's right about not needing that silly deductive reasoning thing! Probably. ;) The trail was kinda fun. Discord realizing Tia's testifying in a courtroom she's supposed to be judging was hilarious. Hi, Thorax! Nice to see you! Shame about Pharynx. Doesn't look like this timeline needs to worry about psychedelic changelings...ever? Possibly. Though I do wonder what you're version of the lore says of the love giving magical transformation thing. I mean, the show version *seems* to be that that transformation's the goal, and Chryssie was preventing them from reaching their full potential, but you clearly have gone a different way... Ah, well, you've also cleverly made it a nonissue by Chryssie having no reason to chase Thorax away for being weak. Also, Thorazine stealth puns. ;) Update something soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's extremely likely the "close personal friends with Fire" line was just coincidence, but all the same I'm wondering if you've ever read Dragonlance? Ooo, things are turning Discord's way at last, even if it won't last it was great fun. I wonder if the Element of Cruelty is capable of being annoyed that it went from subjecting an entire race to spreading malicious rumours in a filly's hooves? That Avatar of Disharmony idea is interesting... Seeing Discord's take on his own reformation was interesting. Hey, you're fic deconstruction theme snuck a few snarks about songfics too. XD Heh, now for once I dunno which chapter to hope for more (though of course I know of you'll update most of your other stories first) a new chapter here or in Elements of Opposition? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wear cowboy boots, cowboy hat, dress shirt and jeans with the biggest gold belt buckle I can find. Don't forgot the asshole aviator sunglasses. For the low low low price of a bottle of coke or a new leather jacket I am willing to off mister anon or st least send 4chan after him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What he needs is Frank Fuckmothering Horrigan, or just shoot the fucker. I despise the Gary Stus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the story, I hope you will someday continue it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mmm, world building is tasty. Torch and Ember were fun to see. Especially Ember. And I see we have similar opinions of Garble. Spike's been confirmed as the Editor too. So much foreshadowing! Going to get Hatred, the probably bearers for it and Cruelty, and didn't Spike mention something about getting this chapter because of Discord being held captive at Fluttershy's, hmm? Unless I'm forgetting a story of yours, this is the last of Christmas presents, yes? Well, the update streak was fun while it lasted... Happy Holidays to you and yours, Alara! |