Reviews for Follow the Wolves
jormanrodas23 chapter 3 . 9/28/2021
ok although I keep the previous chapter I do not deny that now I see the murasama more feasible and I like the story you gave it, it is not bad and it is very interesting although that if, you could let it stay both with incuersio and with murasama, no that you choose only one and that it evolve would be epic
jormanrodas23 chapter 2 . 9/28/2021
You know, I think it would be easier to just make tatsumi evolve into a raid remember that when tatsumi reaches its limit and its will and thirst for fighting increase that is when raid adapts and evolves, although it is true that the tatsumi of your fanfic does not have its body as adapted as the tatsumi of the manga when it evolves for the first time, you could leveling saying that it is weaker and that its body would be hurt because as I said its body is not as adapted or trained as the manga or anime, apart from the situation that It is with the leviathan if it evolves it will be credible apart it would make more sense than what you did with the toten and murasame, apart if it evolves it could bother wabe a bit who said that raid is inferior and it is also more functional for other things, but good to see how about the next chapter
jormanrodas23 chapter 1 . 9/28/2021
is it me or did you make wabe more mature? because wabe does not act like that if not until the end of the manga the same thing happens with tatsumi that the manga is more serious smart and badass, this tatsumi of the fic is obviously the tatsumi of the story at the beginning when I was a beginner and it goes well well then It was when he met esdeath and the jears but wabe seems like I said, it seems like the one from later on (the one who fights against the son of honest more or less) which is not bad because if he does not let it escape and the story flows as you want, but then I only say it because it seemed interesting to me and the story looks good.

postscript: that wave really does not know the very superior, it beats him in all aspects that it is raid literan great chariot it is just a copy with a more beautiful design nothing else (and not even that because raid has several evolutions that have better design)
Victorius 435 chapter 6 . 3/22/2021
Steven ExT chapter 18 . 2/8/2021
update soon i love your story
WLU1430.N5.SPS chapter 18 . 9/30/2020
Absolutely well written, such an amazing story and as well as story line. Not only did you give ample enough reasoning and stories as the why he decided to stay with the Jaegers and how he still loved those from Night Raid. It was beautiful seeing you give every Jaeger a greta personality as well as having Kurome become what seemed like a little kid to Tatsumi and have her and Wave obviously have feelings for eachother but not act on it. One thing I would say though is I wish we would have or we get an ending in which Esdeath and Tatsumi finally admit they love eachother and I feel with your amazing writing its almost like you built up to but just never made it to having an sexual relationship. I think it would be great to have him become like her in his lust and slowly want Esdeath to sleep with him and become as she is, in the sense of the fact that she completely lusts for him. I think you wrote about how uncomfortable and unused to it Esdeath was when she thought about her love for Tatsumi and how she blushed about all that. I think it would also to have seen her and Tatsumi finally come out in a sense, everyone on the team knows they are lusting but I think it would be awesome for her to introduce him as her Lieutenant and her boyfriend, like when she introduces him to Bolic she says "This is my lieutenant and boyfriend Tatsumi". I think it would also be interesting to have seen him tell Night Raid that a big reason he was staying with the Jaegers was because he was in love with Esdeath, I think you could make it interesting and make it a revelation at like the end of a battle or something and either have her there and it shock her as well or have her come into the room after getting a report from someone else and asking if he really said it and have him say yes and pull her into his arms. But you really wrote a whole story of your own and wrote emotions and reasons as emotions and not words. You explained when the room would get cold or hot as Esdeath and Titsumi got close without saying something like "it got cold" or something way to much and you didn't repeat it either, making every time feel like it was the first time hearing this. It was beautiful how you wrote that she didn't understand everything Tatsumi or her felt but made it very obvious that she was very willing to learn more. I just hope we get more chapters. If you are looking for a story that has some of the ending I talked about but not nearly the story you wrote check out, Down A Different Branch and Akame ga Hunt by ExNarutoFan.
WLU1430.N5.SPS chapter 1 . 9/30/2020
CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE! I don’t want to read the last chapter because I don’t want it to end!
Giovanni Garcia chapter 1 . 9/19/2020
Where in the anime/manga does this start at?
Angryhenry chapter 18 . 5/22/2020
I enjoyed this a lot more than I thought. The relationships are beautiful
Bull-lock chapter 18 . 4/21/2019
R.I.P. Good AgK Fanfic.
Guest chapter 13 . 11/26/2018
Bullshit so he cant beat blue scheen but he can beat sussuno in one hit icall bullshit no way and barely uses incursio like what the fuck plus beating leone and destroying pumpkin plus blocking mine shot while she was in danger now hes just op
BlackCrystal06 chapter 18 . 10/25/2018
Awwww! It just had to be a cliffhanger.. I dont see any next button anywhere and I'm really hoping to see this until the end of it. Its amazingly written too
BlackCrystal06 chapter 15 . 10/25/2018
I was laughing so hard.. Well, I still am! Seriously Wave, in a fish barrel? The irony! You need not to get so Jealous too! Tatsumi already have Esdeath so dont worry
BlackCrystal06 chapter 14 . 10/25/2018
I love this storyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
BlackCrystal06 chapter 13 . 10/25/2018
Ohhhhhh! I kinda like this Tatsumi tho
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