|Reviews for Heat|
| Ashalim chapter 1 . 11/3/2017
This fanfic need a series adaption
| NHarem Foreva chapter 1 . 3/6/2017
this needs a continuation ._.
| happygirl3024 chapter 1 . 11/19/2016
If this is not one shot please make more
| Nexus Bladeguard chapter 1 . 7/22/2016
I got no quips. Nice story.
| Operator Bleiss chapter 1 . 2/8/2016
A very interesting take on Jaune and Cinder! A very unquie oneshot. Excellent work, my friend.
| The Canadian Patriot chapter 1 . 11/13/2015
| AdrianCabanillas chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
| Ickbard chapter 1 . 3/12/2015
Can we please see the fire knight, ship?
| Redriot8 chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
PLEASE dude, PLEASE! Make. a. SEQUEL! PLEASE
| Kifo Sotri chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Wow, this was really good. Any chance you'd continue this? Fire some reason I'm loving the idea of Jaune x Cinder (I heard someone call this ship "The stake" and it's been a curiosity since)
| LuckyTheCatKid chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I have somehow gotten hooked on this pairing. What is it called? Burning Moon? Falling Arc? Fire Arc? Arc of Fire?...
I'm sorry I'll stop making bad ship names now...
| 7-12m3 chapter 1 . 10/23/2014
Wait. wasn't Jaune in a dress after Cinder's mission?
Gonnna go re-read this with that image in mind.
| Shimmer Stream chapter 1 . 9/24/2014
I like this. MOAR PLZ.
| Ghest chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
this is vying with rubyxcrescent for my otp. one has canon and the other is too interesting to let go.
| Slen D. Man chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
Not enough Cinder PoV fics on this site, a damn shame that.
Though on a somewhat unrelated note, I was 95% sure that Cinder would try and Black Widow Juane as a means to mess with Pyrrha, but eh! This came close enough to satisfying the dissapointment I felt when that didn't happen.
Anywho, tangent over. I liked the story and stuff.