|Reviews for Riddled|
| Qazzio chapter 30 . 18h
10/10 please continue
| Silentxxdreamer chapter 30 . 9/17
I've only just found this!
I'm glad you're continuing, and I trust that you'll write in the healthiest way for you. 3
There's some fics I follow that post maybe twice a year, so don't let any one pressure you to change your pacing!
From your author's note in the last chapter, I was anticipating some Moony interaction, but I'm pleased to see Sirius owning up to his behavior. Although I fear the lead up to the end of the 5th book; Having Harry get closer too him will make my heart hurt if you follow the canon.
| Ollie chapter 30 . 9/15
I love this story and I think your doing a great job, keep it up!
| aSinglePancake chapter 1 . 9/6
Haven't sat down and read this yet, but dang the premise is kind of creepy in a child grooming kind of way
| JackRenee chapter 7 . 9/3
I'm enjoying reading your story, and look forward to Harry maturing into an independent witch.
One constructive criticism: Snape and Minerva's open, honest response to Harry's query was a bit unbelievable. While Minerva might have indulged her with a story on the weekend or after classes perhaps, Snape seems an unlikely candidate to bear all, especially his childhood and being a victim to bullying.
It might have made more sense for her to discover it some other way, over time.
| xxxLeanniexxx chapter 30 . 9/3
Sirius is slowly growing up.
| HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 3 . 8/25
I like Harriet's arguements and I ADORE that you are using the Muggleborns are squib descendant on both sides of the parentage theory. I personally hold to that theory myself and believe it isn't more well known amongst the wizarding kind outside of Unspeakables because it would cause too much chaos. ...I forgot all the ways how but I'll remember again eventually
Now to finish this chapter...
| acetwolf94 chapter 30 . 8/22
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
| sunsethill chapter 30 . 8/22
I actually agree with your take on how Sirius would react to Lily. After spending years with her rejecting James, I can see him being angry and suspicious of her. It's good to see him trying to grow up for Harry's sake, though.
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/21
I love this story so much. Nice progression of things! I feel like you have very age-appropriate reactions in your characters as well :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 8/21
I love T and H''s dynamic!
| Pyrefangs chapter 30 . 8/21
Captivating and I am enjoying it! You've left me wanting more!
| TheCatDidIt XBLX chapter 30 . 8/21
Great to see an update after so long! As an adult, realising the nature of adult/underage relationships, maybe it's an opportunity for Harry in teenage years to have a crisis over or start questioning, maybe through external influence, someone says or does something that really shakes her or hee faith in Tom, pushes the boundaries a bit too far.
I hope you're health improves, it's a lot more important than this fic. We will always be here and we will wait patiently, look after and love yourself above all.
| EndlessChains chapter 30 . 8/20
A well done chapter. An interesting conversation Harry and Sirius had with one another as they go into the crux of the issue in their relationship. It made sense that Sirius couldn’t look past what Slytherins are to him, but at least he is will to try and change a bit for Harry’s sake and trying to be coded to her as she doesn’t want a parent in her life after all she went through. Being inducted into the Order will be interesting as Harry and Tom will be listening in on what they have to say even if it’s nothing of importance. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
| tabala chapter 28 . 8/20
Will your Dumbledore really turn against Tom and Harriet after Voldemort is gone, or will he be true to his word about giving him a second chance?