|Reviews for Riddled|
| Rainbow Prime chapter 17 . 1/25/2018
Quick non-story question. Why do you have the little thing by your name that means that you can be PM'D if the option to do it isn't on your profile?
| Rainbow Prime chapter 16 . 1/25/2018
See? Like this instance! I mean, I certainly wasn't going to bring up something this graphic, but it's not me bringing it up, now is it? I mean, people who take advantage of children the way that Lockhart tried to take advantage of Harriet deserve exactly what happened to Lockhart. If not worse.
| Rainbow Prime chapter 10 . 1/25/2018
You know, for the longest time now, I had thought that the "By Killing Curse Eyes" bit up there at the top? I thought that that was actually part of the title that was saved for people who read the story. I didn't realize that it was actually the username of the author of the story until just now. It could, actually, be both, in feel. Like, it could be also made into part of the title that was saved for people who read the story. It would totally fit with the rest of the title.
| Rainbow Prime chapter 4 . 1/25/2018
Um...Harriet's a girl, not a boy. So Vernon saying that Arabella Figg can't take the boy sounds like he's talking about Dudley.
| Rainbow Prime chapter 3 . 1/25/2018
You say that as if being crazy is a BAD thing! Well, not only am I personally offended by that, as I talk to the externalized voices in my head all the time, but my good buddy Joker has some advice for you!
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| Rainbow Prime chapter 2 . 1/25/2018
You know, I agree with Tom abourt magic, up to a point. Let me explain. Say you know someone who's dying from a rare, incurable, highly painful disease, and you have the power to end their suffering. Do you just let them continue to suffer, or do you end theiir pain and misery by killing them? Now, the government and society would have you believe that the moral thing to do would be to keep that person alive for as long as possible. Because, you know, who cares if the person is in a massive amount of pain? Who cares if they'll never have a better quality of life than what they do now? I, on the other hand, argue that you should euthanize the poor individual, and relieve them of their suffering. There is no absolutes when it comes to right or wrong. Every situation should be judged by itself. Just like magic. There is no absolutely Light Magic, or absolutely Dark Magic. Every situation should be judged by itself. For instance: the Cruciactus curse. That would ordinarily be a dark curse, but picture this scenario: Voldemort bursts into Harry's parents house, and instead of Stupefy, or whatever Light spell James Potter tried to use to slow him down, James fires Crucio at the Dark Lord while Lily fires Imperio. While the Dark Lord is busy fighting off the effects of one of the curses, the effects of the other curse would take effect. For instane, let'ssay that he successfully fights off the Crucio curse. He would still have been focusing his mental discipline on that long enough for the Imoerio curse to set in. Or, he fights off the Imperio curse. Same thing happens. Either way, he's screwed. And that would be an example of when two supposedly Unforgivable Curses would be totally justifiable. So, in short, it all depends on what you do with any power that you have,
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/24/2018
You made significant changes, unfortunately you still seem to hit stations of canon and rehash canon relationships. If you continue this and force a fucking troll scene from canon, that is very bad form and bailout worthy offence.
Change deviation from canon
That said, you write very well.
| Guest chapter 29 . 1/17/2018
Great story but I really don't want the order including the Wesley kids to know Harry and Tom are part of voldy's soul. Id like for longbottom to die though and Harry and Tom to save the day. More chapters please
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/15/2018
I do like this story. Expecially since she isnt portrayed as a saint but am hesitwnt to keep reading because harriet has admited more then once she does things just for tom. Thinks like studing practicing and went as far as to be 'prety'for him. This obession with boys at 11 is a bit much and her bluch everytime he is around is annoying. The two things i hate abt female leads your doing. Making her do everything for a guy. Money? No prob have mine. Study? Only cause i want to be uaeful to tom, wear dresses n make up to look good for tom. She should want to study n practice so she can be strong enough to not be a pawn. She should be interested in those politics she found boring because she knows it effects her. I would love to see her better herself for herself not for tom. Thanx for writing none the less do hope updates are in the future
| Lotte2265 chapter 29 . 1/6/2018
Really great story! Is this ABANDONED? :)
| PurpleBooks58 chapter 1 . 12/1/2017
Please update! Love this ff
| reptoholic chapter 29 . 11/25/2017
Love your story so far
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| reptoholic chapter 26 . 11/25/2017
Keep it up!