Reviews for Riddled
Kagugu chapter 30 . 10/18/2018
thank you for your hard work
Kagugu chapter 29 . 10/18/2018
uh
I really don't understand about the prophecy.. ? is it really neville who is bwl or dumbledore is just spinning? I just.. everything points to harriet but then whole story goes as fit's actually not her despite all the shit she goes through...? will you explain it somewhere? it's so weird when all the prophecy-related things happen to harriet but then dumbles is like nah it's about neville he's a boy you see and prophecy goes about teh boi so you're just very unfortunate and decoy run your merry way twink-twink
slyKat28 chapter 30 . 10/2/2018
I love this. the way you've written this is so well done and I can't wait for more!
Qazzio chapter 30 . 9/24/2018
10/10 please continue
Silentxxdreamer chapter 30 . 9/17/2018
I've only just found this!
It's incredible!
I'm glad you're continuing, and I trust that you'll write in the healthiest way for you. 3
There's some fics I follow that post maybe twice a year, so don't let any one pressure you to change your pacing!

From your author's note in the last chapter, I was anticipating some Moony interaction, but I'm pleased to see Sirius owning up to his behavior. Although I fear the lead up to the end of the 5th book; Having Harry get closer too him will make my heart hurt if you follow the canon.
Ollie chapter 30 . 9/15/2018
I love this story and I think your doing a great job, keep it up!
aPancake chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
Haven't sat down and read this yet, but dang the premise is kind of creepy in a child grooming kind of way
JackRenee chapter 7 . 9/3/2018
I'm enjoying reading your story, and look forward to Harry maturing into an independent witch.
One constructive criticism: Snape and Minerva's open, honest response to Harry's query was a bit unbelievable. While Minerva might have indulged her with a story on the weekend or after classes perhaps, Snape seems an unlikely candidate to bear all, especially his childhood and being a victim to bullying.
It might have made more sense for her to discover it some other way, over time.
xxxLeanniexxx chapter 30 . 9/3/2018
Sirius is slowly growing up.
HP-fanfic-fan101 chapter 3 . 8/25/2018
I like Harriet's arguements and I ADORE that you are using the Muggleborns are squib descendant on both sides of the parentage theory. I personally hold to that theory myself and believe it isn't more well known amongst the wizarding kind outside of Unspeakables because it would cause too much chaos. ...I forgot all the ways how but I'll remember again eventually

Now to finish this chapter...
acetwolf94 chapter 30 . 8/22/2018
I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!
sunsethill chapter 30 . 8/22/2018
I actually agree with your take on how Sirius would react to Lily. After spending years with her rejecting James, I can see him being angry and suspicious of her. It's good to see him trying to grow up for Harry's sake, though.
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21/2018
I love this story so much. Nice progression of things! I feel like you have very age-appropriate reactions in your characters as well :)
Guest chapter 4 . 8/21/2018
I love T and H''s dynamic!
Pyrefangs chapter 30 . 8/21/2018
Captivating and I am enjoying it! You've left me wanting more!
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