Reviews for Riddled
MoonPrincess623 chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
I love how he is with her. As she grows older, he will be so possessive. Delicious.
Melikalilly chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
I love this story
Pri-Chan 1410 chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
cant wait to see what will happen!

please update soon!
Extended Experience chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Haha, wow, that's great. And, just like I said, it's picking up! :)
yume chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
update soon!
The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Cant wait for more :)
vsama chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Will Harry ever get access to her trust vault?
ptl4ever419 chapter 5 . 9/20/2014
Love it as always you're story amazes me with it's creativity.
DiagonAlleyParis chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
Your writing is good. I like the interactions between Tom and Harry. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for sharing.
aine hathaway chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
Your story is amazing and a great idea! I am absolutely loving it so far and can't wait to read more of it!
blue sky chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
Just found your story and its great. I love it. And I really love your Harry, she seems to be realistic, at the moment she is not evil and I really hope she never will be. But she is not good either, she seems more neutral and maybe a little detached and I really hope she stays so. Because the interaction between her and Tom are so much better than she is neither good or evil. For example: should we kill your relatives? No, wait until you're the supreme ruler of the wizarding England. Love this sentence. Can't wait for the next chapter
yume chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
update soon...
The all mighty and powerfulM chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
This is really interesting. Cant wait for more :)
CaeruleanBalance chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
I really like the story so far, the establishing pace is great and the wording and grammar is awesome considering you don't have a beta.
Extended Experience chapter 4 . 9/20/2014
No, you're good! I think you are a tad repetitive, but not noticeably so, and it's just because your story hadn't picked up, as I know it will! :) Also, I forget to ask, but is "Brit picker" an actual term? Because I think I love it, haha!
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