|Reviews for Croquis|
| SydneyLouWho chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
This is so pretty.
The imagery in this i s. Although it is short, it tells a full story, and that's amazing.
I wish it was a bit longer, just so I could read more of your words, because the way you used words here was so poetic and beautiful and I felt like I could see/hear what you were describing.
Absolutely beautiful fic. Lovely job!
| Rose Windsor chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
| AprilLittle chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
This is gorgeous.
| Estoma chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
[outlines the pattern of a wing.] Oh! That last line just got me. So beautiful, and so sad because I know what will happen and I get the sense here that Cinna does to. The snapping of the lead is just wonderful foreshadowing to Cinna's end...
Thanks for writing this for me, it is rather gorgeous.
| Gamemakers chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
I love it! I think you captured the idea of an artist as a conduit for art very well here. I did spot one tiny mistake - in [for something to go wrong know] I assume you actually meant 'now.' Otherwise, it was lovely. Great job, Jo!