Reviews for Croquis
SydneyLouWho chapter 1 . 6/25/2015
This is so pretty.

The imagery in this i s. Although it is short, it tells a full story, and that's amazing.

I wish it was a bit longer, just so I could read more of your words, because the way you used words here was so poetic and beautiful and I felt like I could see/hear what you were describing.

Absolutely beautiful fic. Lovely job!

Keep Writing!

Rose Windsor chapter 1 . 10/15/2014
love it
AprilLittle chapter 1 . 9/18/2014


This is gorgeous.
Estoma chapter 1 . 9/18/2014
[outlines the pattern of a wing.] Oh! That last line just got me. So beautiful, and so sad because I know what will happen and I get the sense here that Cinna does to. The snapping of the lead is just wonderful foreshadowing to Cinna's end...

Thanks for writing this for me, it is rather gorgeous.

Gamemakers chapter 1 . 9/17/2014
I love it! I think you captured the idea of an artist as a conduit for art very well here. I did spot one tiny mistake - in [for something to go wrong know] I assume you actually meant 'now.' Otherwise, it was lovely. Great job, Jo!