This is really good! It has good characters, suspenseful writing, and an interesting plot!

The only bad thing about this is THAT IT NEEDS MORE CHAPTERS GOD FUCKING DAMNIT! UPDATE! REEEEEEEEEEEE

DOOD this is so fucking good. Please continue it, love the writing, the history and the plot all woven together. Keep up the great work!

adfkjdhfa;kjdsf! this is brilliant

Oh no, I thought this was a completed fic. Shoot. Well, even if it's a long shot, I would still love to read more

I really enjoyed Hiccup's time in Alexandria, and I appreciate all of the research you seem to have put in. Looking forward to what happens next

This is some unbelievably cool worldbuilding. You said that you thought this might be a boring chapter, but the idea of Hiccup learning in a place like Alexandria is incredible to me. This has been an amazing read so far, I can't tell if I want to see more of Hiccup in Alexandria or see him return home!

I really should be studying for exams, but instead I spent a whole day and half the night reading this brilliant piece. I love it, and I can't even fathom the amount of hard work and effort that has gone into its creation. The way it has captured whole histories, cultures, beliefs, politics, and some much more is bloody amazing! The detail is incredible. And so I dearly thank you for this. Much love :) 3

Would it be bad if I asked you for another chapter in Hiccups POV? I want to know how he's doing and what turmoil he's going through. His thoughts and etc.

This is a good slow build up to Hiccups reveal. Though, hopefully it won't be dragged out too much.

Oh boy.
I come to read a good story, and I... nevermind.

In reality, yes, it would be. But it's not. It's fiction. Based on books. It's cartoony for a reason.
Anyway, there shouldn't be a hyphen between Tuffnut and Ruffnut's names.

This is awesome! Where is the next update I cant wait to more!

Just an idea for another title, To Abjure

So amazing!