Reviews for Bid Time Return
Hiddennamehere chapter 20 . 12/10/2023
Excellent story!
keht.jelicho chapter 20 . 11/9/2023
wonderful story.
the only critique I would mention I that the combat scenes/lightsaber duels come across as much more Original trilogy as opposed to the flashy choreographed confrontations of later movies, and games.
That's not even meant as a negative critique per se, and more of an observation than a critique at that.
still this has been a beautiful story, and I am just slightly sad Padme didn't get to reestablish a friendship with Ahsoka, at least I think I remember the two having been friends.
Axccel chapter 4 . 11/6/2023
Actually, her age is normal for Nubian monarchs. It’s a very stupid idea.
Axccel chapter 1 . 11/6/2023
Eh, Padme, YOU violated your agreement with the Trade Federation and turned the Senate against them. Their actions are directly your fault and responsibility. Which is WHY the Senate couldn’t just come and rescue your world.
YourNameIsMine chapter 20 . 8/30/2023
trash, only trash please no write more never
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2023
So Anakin is Padme's pet? How lovely Padme is the worst.
Debra N chapter 20 . 1/22/2023
Thank you for sharing this delightful romance. Obi-Wan’s steady devotion even as Padme struggled to figure out where her heart belonged felt very believable. I also thought you did a great job describing the confrontation between Palpatine and Obi-Wan. I love that Ashoka ended up being Qui-Gon’s padawan. Your writing talents are greatly appreciated.
BlueTea21 chapter 20 . 12/14/2022
Just finished reading this for the second time. Best fic where Padme takes charge.
savedprincess85 chapter 20 . 8/26/2022
This was absolutely the most beautiful story!
Tanathar chapter 20 . 6/27/2022
Great story!
katraj0908 chapter 20 . 6/5/2022
Brilliant.
MaySail199 chapter 19 . 5/3/2022
Great Far Away Time Travel Story.., not an easy taskwell done indeed!
Winterislate chapter 20 . 4/26/2022
Absolutely glorious story! Thank you for the journey.
SoldierOfTheSea chapter 20 . 1/9/2022
This is probably one of the best written Star Wars I’ve ever read. You ability to make me care and worry for Padmé and Obi-Wan is astounding. The tension and premise are amazing and I love how you ended this. A relatively short, yet complete story I would recommend to any Star Wars “what if” fan. Keep up the great work!
EmilyWoods chapter 20 . 9/25/2021
Wow...great story...Star Wars never happened...this plot blew my mind. I greatly enjoyed it. Thank you.
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