Reviews for Bid Time Return |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful story. the only critique I would mention I that the combat scenes/lightsaber duels come across as much more Original trilogy as opposed to the flashy choreographed confrontations of later movies, and games. That's not even meant as a negative critique per se, and more of an observation than a critique at that. still this has been a beautiful story, and I am just slightly sad Padme didn't get to reestablish a friendship with Ahsoka, at least I think I remember the two having been friends. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually, her age is normal for Nubian monarchs. It’s a very stupid idea. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eh, Padme, YOU violated your agreement with the Trade Federation and turned the Senate against them. Their actions are directly your fault and responsibility. Which is WHY the Senate couldn’t just come and rescue your world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() trash, only trash please no write more never |
![]() ![]() So Anakin is Padme's pet? How lovely Padme is the worst. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for sharing this delightful romance. Obi-Wan’s steady devotion even as Padme struggled to figure out where her heart belonged felt very believable. I also thought you did a great job describing the confrontation between Palpatine and Obi-Wan. I love that Ashoka ended up being Qui-Gon’s padawan. Your writing talents are greatly appreciated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just finished reading this for the second time. Best fic where Padme takes charge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely the most beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great Far Away Time Travel Story.., not an easy taskwell done indeed! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely glorious story! Thank you for the journey. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is probably one of the best written Star Wars I’ve ever read. You ability to make me care and worry for Padmé and Obi-Wan is astounding. The tension and premise are amazing and I love how you ended this. A relatively short, yet complete story I would recommend to any Star Wars “what if” fan. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...great story...Star Wars never happened...this plot blew my mind. I greatly enjoyed it. Thank you. |