Wow, I gotta say you're writing style's improved a lot since the original. And I like that you didn't make Logan "perfect" at everything he does like last time. Nice work! To be honest, I liked the high school setting a little better but this world looks cool too.
Who are Lou and Devon? Are they OCs or are they from another show/game? You should really tell your readers these things so they don't get too confused. Overall, a really good start! Looking forward to more!

Awesome start