Reviews for Double Date Fun
Sorceress of Magic chapter 1 . 5/5
Super cute
magicanimegurl chapter 1 . 1/5/2017
This is very sweet and endearing. Good job. Write on!
xNaruHina chapter 1 . 12/25/2016
That was absolutely adorable! I want more!
The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 4/18/2016
I like what you did with this pairing. You did show that Harry and Astoria have a connection and you really give promise for that development.

I guess the only problem I find here is the drabble format. This begs, BEGS for a multi-chapter treatment. There's too much here that needs to be made expicite. There's too many other relationships to account for. I can see a proposal, with Harry asking Astoria if she would make him Daphne's Brother-in-Law (LOL!).

Would you expand this, pretty please?

TGM
Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
Well, it beats the Crapilogue.
tamer.of.the.wild.things.13 chapter 1 . 6/3/2015
Not my usual favourite pairings, but that was very cute :)
Le Diablo Blanc2 chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
love the pairing so I really enjoyed this chapter
Emeraldfireblade chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
An amusing scenario. I'm not really used to such a polished, mature Harry, but it was believable. It would have been nice to see more than a single perspective, but then again, I can understand wanting to keep a short story simple.

PS. I'm still very much looking forward to seeing your story based on my idea.

Guardian of the Sacred Emerald Flames
TheBeauty chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Nice story. I really enjoyed reading it :)
Bigbaz chapter 1 . 9/20/2014
Great story could even be made into a multi short story involving more dates