Does she... I know this will sound cringy and probably not for this story, but does she have Mokuton?.

wait- is it Madara or Orochimaru? Orochimadara? I'm confused. Danzo, do you think that Orochimaru *is* Madara, or are you angry because Orochimaru *revived* Madara?

atla reference at the end there was nice

I love wild ideas like this

THATS IT!? "Updated in 2017"

Damn it!
Come back!

Alright, I give up, my stupid brain won't give me interest to read the last chapter of this story. Still, it's a really good and interesting one so I'm favoriting it for future rereads anyway. I didn't know I needed it my life.
Either way, thank you for writing and sharing this story. Bye!

Love it , such a good si !

Can’t wait to see the next chapter

Oh, God! It is getting WORSE.

Okay, first of all, the idea of Kakashi, Ebisu, genin Naruto, and genin Sasuke facing an invasion of 1000 Suna ninjas is okay but the author is overdoing it by making the Konoha team actually winning.

I could take if the Suna force took some attrition, lost some supplies, and got some injuries. But the way it is portrayed, it seems as if every Suna ninja was an utter waste of air. As if they were not even as good as civilian thugs.

This is a blatant case of making the MC group OP and adjusting the enemy down in order to make the MC group seem cooler.

And yet, the MC is not even participating in this battle.

I also do not like how arrogant Sakura became. She is not listening to Ishi almost at all despite her success so far being pretty much due to him. Yet, till this moment in the story, Ishi is mostly just comedic relief with an occasional good suggestion or help with a seal. He is quite useless up till now and in the later chapters, his interaction with Sakura is going downhill. As if he started to lose even his 'support character' role, relegated to a background character. Considering he is supposed to be the MC, that's quite sad.

An example. 24 chapters yet, I still have no idea what Ishi's goal is. What is driving him and why he is doing the things he is doing. The character has no substance.

Well, there is more but who cares?

Yes. This chapter killed this story.

First of all, this story had its problems from the start. But it was mostly made irrelevant by its good points. But this chapter was just one massive clusterfuck.

You do NOT make an invasion an important point of a story, create a situation where Team 7 is outnumbered 1 to 200 and they can not retreat... AND THEN force the MAIN CHARACTER to leave the battle, leaving it only to her teammates. Whether the author likes it or not, Sakura is the main character in this story because his SI is kinda pointless and irrelevant for the most part. So, the author created this cool moment where MC could have shined, something like how Sakura dealt with 200 Gato thugs in Wave arc, only to send the MC away from the fight.

I don't particularly CARE about Naruto or Sasuke. They can eat a dick for all I care. They are not the MC. So, making them overshadow Sakura, the actual MC, really doesn't feel good. What's the point of that?

And then the mistake of Sakura blurting out to Hokage that Wind country sent invasion to Konoha... WHILE the Kazekage was standing right next to him.

I understand that this kind of mistake is kinda possible in her situation, but it is also so ridiculously stupid that my suspension of disbelief simply can't classify it any other than a failure.

In short, the idea was amazing, the execution a total shit.

Her body used so much chakra and then with the solider pill forcing her body to keep going, her body went into overdrive to make more chakra. Her chakra coils are a lot bigger, but sense she has been low for so long she doesn’t notice how big the gap is from the last time she was full. She has to readjust how much chakra and reserves she needs to pull, her chakra could also become much more dense. Needing less chakra to do more things. Or maybe the chakra was reworked? I just don’t understand why she can’t meditate and focus on her body and try and figure out what’s wrong with her chakra.

Also, I wonder when she will put seals and Medic Chakra together to make something happen. If only to stop her idiots from killing themselves.

ACTUALLY, Kakashi is the one to kill Kazuku. He technically survived the Rasenshuriken, and if given time could have recovered (in theory)

BIJU COUNTING SONG!

“A thern gave him access to the ninth rayHUH? I don’t understand the reference

Okay Sakura, Ishi, formation PB, NOW. (Aka pussybitch)

sit back and watch the drama happen