Reviews for The Diclonius Mother
Zero testarossa chapter 26 . 9/19/2023
Are you going to continue this?
Rainbow Prime chapter 10 . 7/25/2023
"Well...he...wasn't the first one I've killed..." Harry stared up at her, shock written all over his face. Lucy cringed at the expression, but continued. "You see...When I was a child...People weren't kind to me...I...I grew up in an orphanage...The other kids would bully me because of my horns..." Harry's face turned sympathetic. He knew what bullying was like..."One day I just...snapped, and I killed people... I killed so many people..."
So...I was liking the story up until this point. She didn't JUST snap one day. What really happened was that, after being constantly bullied by the other children at the orphanage that she lived at, she found an abandoned puppy outside, and decided to take care of it. The puppy became the first friend that she had ever had, much like how Hedwig is sometimes called Harry's first friend. The other kids from the orphanage saw that she had it, and decided to beat it to death, while forcing her to watch. This makes what she did to those children completely understandable.
Guest chapter 26 . 1/26/2023
Whenever you get a new co-writer, have you ever thought about Akiza from YGO 5ds as Harry's mother?
Andrew Preece chapter 1 . 12/7/2022
Sorry, I meant to say Scp 347. Stupid autocorrect.
Trace Reading chapter 23 . 12/4/2022
Stop whining!

Anyway most guest and even most named reviewers are like "OMG THIS FIC SO AWSUM BEST FIC ON SITE 10000%" when it's like.. written by an 8 year old or something, or at least appears to be, so the ones that take the time to actually dislike something are at least doing something other than wanking. So many writers come back with 'DON'T LIKE DON'T READ' and fail to apply the same logic to reviews or, as they OUGHT to if they don't want flames/trolls, moderate guest reviews.

You never addressed how Kaede knows English, if I'm reading things correctly. Because I watched the series (and read the manga for comparison) and I don't remember her ever speaking any, being a Japanese national and being kept in a Japanese black site and all that.
Trace Reading chapter 8 . 12/3/2022
Dollars? In the UK?
Kaiju chapter 26 . 11/19/2022

Could you do Amphibia, with Anne, Sasha, and Marcy as mothers to Harry?
Guest chapter 26 . 11/14/2022
If you get around to it, could you make more of your Hazbin Harry Potter story? New episodes are coming out next summer, and Helluva Boss is currently in it's second season, I think Millie and Moxxie would dote on him, even Blitzo because of how polite Harry is, not sure about Loona, but I think Stolas and Octavia would also like him, Stella might even like him because he has noble blood and she might end up smelling that.
The Art Vampire chapter 25 . 9/23/2022
for curiosity sake how does becoming a co-writer work?
spacecowboy2011 chapter 1 . 9/23/2022
HELP WANTED. Looking for story content. /s
docscherer chapter 25 . 3/5/2022
5 chapters 5 chapters of nothing but author notes that is literally one of the most annoying things someone can do on this website
Ian Dickson chapter 25 . 1/16/2021
I know of DDLC, and I am interested in writing it up with you.
Ian Dickson chapter 24 . 1/16/2021
Okay, Gamer95. I can be a replacement. I am willing to step in.
StingyWingy chapter 18 . 9/21/2019
Snape's character is much more accurate here than in your other stories since he refuses to see harry was abused. Despite being abused himself he absolutely hated harry with every bone in his body. Take away his decision to betray voldemort and to keep harry alive and everything else he has done shows how much of a monster he was.
Elfin69 chapter 3 . 6/1/2019
So how long before they are found and Harry and Lucy safe and healed
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