Reviews for The Diclonius Mother
Elfin69 chapter 2 . 6/1/2019
Wow, was not expecting that. Will Lucy be able to hide her horns and somehow not be recognized
Elfin69 chapter 1 . 6/1/2019
Hopefully Lucy will get away safely and Harry will not be hurt by Vernon
Guest chapter 25 . 3/19/2019
Can you please make a harry potter and twin star exorcist motherhood stories
maximin chapter 1 . 3/10/2019
I'm going to try to say this kind and heartfelt as I can, your story is boring. The reason why I find it very boring is there is very little build up and tension to an unsatisfying end of conflict. There's always a nice person there's always someone who helps them out there's always a simple solution to your conflicts that I've seen I've read 17 of the 25 chapters and this happens a lot. I really wanted to like this story I thought the story was head pretty interesting Concepts I liked that you had Dumbledore remorseful. I like parts of your story but as one cohesive unit I find it very boring and everything is very quick and feels rushed and like there's no like satisfying ends to your conflict they just stop. I hope you find this helpful I understand if you don't I hope you make good stories in the future
Tsukoblue chapter 25 . 2/26/2019
I hope this story will get updated soon

It’s extremely good
Guest chapter 25 . 1/10/2019
The name of the game is demon king domination
Axekick chapter 25 . 1/10/2019
If i could suggest a new story idea? Son of the ice witch a harry potter ben-to crossover Sen yarizui has just left a store and is finds harry in an alley being abused by his fat bastard uncle so she comes to his rescue and turns the walrus into roadkill please consider it.
Guest chapter 25 . 1/10/2019
Hey i just thought of another motherhood project you heard of demon king domination well if made a story about the demon king taking over Harry's body and when the female hero Dianne finally slays the demon king his body disappears and harry is free and now the child is scared and afraid to die but dianne doesn't kill the little boy instead she brings him to her kingdom to train him to be the next generation of heros but she becomes to have motherly feelings for the child give it whirl I'm sure your fans would love it
Guest chapter 25 . 1/2/2019
I know you're busy trying to find somebody to help you make these stories but maybe you could do this one could you make a Harry Potter and amagi brilliant Park story motherhood of it
Guest chapter 25 . 12/14/2018
Have you thought of writing harry potter and romeo x juliet stories soon
Guest chapter 25 . 12/6/2018
A friend of mine is wondering when are you doing the next chapter of 'Loved By the Monster Girls'? Because he sends you an ideas for the chapter.
CaptureGod-Otamegane chapter 1 . 12/5/2018
Elfen Lied, you've chosen to down a dark path my friend. Sexual, psychological, and physical abuse, then rape, murder, and torcher. Let's see how this goes, at least it doesn't have the body horror of fate/stay.
God of Imagination chapter 25 . 12/3/2018
good ive been waiting for you do this, there are some story that i seriously cant wait for like the monster musume/harry potter story just imagine ron's face of meeting rachena(spelling) XD
Great Spirit Master chapter 25 . 12/3/2018
You know that sounds like a very effective writing method and while it would be help you a lot, I’m afraid I really can’t be a co-writer still I wish you the best of luck finding a good co-writer.
Petra Anderson chapter 25 . 12/2/2018
That's what you should have done from the start all those years ago
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