That's... really depraved. I didn't expect Ron to be that cruel. He doesn't love her, he loves himself more than anyone else. I'm disgusted with Ron.

Ooooo, anticipation!

Um, aren't they in the hospital wing? Silencing wards? Doors Locked?

The conversation between Minerva & Pomfrey was as clear as mud, I am so confused.

I really wished you had made Ron pay instead of giving him someone, he doesn't deserve it.

This. Was. Fantastic. Thank you so much for deciding to write this! This chapter made my week, if not my year :)

I liked the original better I guess

So, to be honest, I got around to love all the pairings in this fic (though I don't think Pansy and Harry are for eternity and I'd like to think he gets back with Ginny over time). Astoria definetly is the best, but I do agree that Draco and Hermione being mean to each other is great. I do love to see them as a happy couple though.
The ending is a picture perfect happy-end, but there is one last problem. Bi-weekly visits? Astoria alone will want to visit more often than that. And since the two of them can't very well just visit at the same timebut oh well. They'll make it work.

Oh, yeah, and you made it into the... I'd say top three of her priorities I'd say

I just realized this chapter was just a sex scene and was laughing so hard... I just hope this dealt with the damn curse for goodI don't care why, just that

I kind of feel sorry for Theo and Pansy now.

It's good that they are working together. But right now there are three people in that relationship. She, he and the Mark. And I'm not sure who holds the power

She really would deserve the truth. I adore Astorias and Dracos friendship by the way

Daphne is lucky Astoria is willing to forgive her

I don't know who I'm more worried about. I mean, Ginny and Harry will be fine I guess, and Ron seems to behave towards Astoria, but that curse really needs to be broken