Oh my goddddddd

Blaise ️

Hahaha omg

Astoria no!

Ahhhhh

Hahahahahaha Draco caught them.

“Don’t care” hahahhaha

This is so funny

This is kind of intriguing

That’s cute

Ouch, that sounds painful

Ron?! What the hell has Hermione done? So intrigued by this.

Oh my god this is hilarious!

Hm... I am not quite sure, what to write, because I am not quite sure, what I think. It was a nice story, but it seemed a bit too long. Too many chapters are just fillers. I have several WTF moments, that annoys me. First Ron's behavior and how it is not really dealt with. What he did was waaaaay over the line, and should have concequences for him. Instead you are giving him a "love" story. Second Madame P. and McG. left a student (Hermione) in harms way, when Draco was cursed. Come on, behavior like that would get them fired. It was unprofessional and it really made me want to throw up. Third the way you described Astoria as almost an empty shell was heartbreaking and really sad. That girl needs help. ASAP!

Anyway I did read the whole story and I enjoyed it partly. However I wish I hadn't read the whole thing because the time spendt on it was not really well spendt. A shorter version with fewer WTF moments would have been more to my taste.

Ron doesn't deserve a girl/girlfriend in this lifetime after the shit he did to Hermione. I wish, Hermione would tell Harry or even better Molly, so the boy could be P-U-N-I-S-H-E-D. Okay, so I should probably stop watching violent movies, if that is what makes me want revenge for Hermione. LOL!