Oh good lord, please write a sequel to this! I've never been a big fan of fem!ed/roy, but you made the characters so spot on and perfect and I was completely enthralled. I immediately went and read your unrelated oneshot. I so badly want more from this story and these two. I went into this story just looking for a smutty scene, but I have never read a love scene so caring and yet interesting and I genuinely enjoyed reading about their nerves and their connection. I need more! I want the heartbreak, and the cheesy final realization that they love each other, and maybe little kids running around. Dear god, woman, please write more!

This was pretty awesome!
You did a great job on you're first lemon. I hope you did get around to writing a sequel. Just where do they go from here? Do they try to move on, but can't stop thinking about what happened? Does Russell Trinham( I think that was his name) come into the picture, and take an interest in Ed? Will Roy get jealous and stake his territory?
See, you got me asking for more!

B reading U!

Wow. Just wow! I read the whole thing in one sitting-all 5 chapters. Not only was the storyline awesome, it was written VERY well. It's been a while since I've read something that made me tingle.

Really great. I wouldn't have guessed this was your first. I have bern looking for a fic like this for quite a bit, with fem Ed.

I like it.

Wow. This was... Very epic.

I would of never thought this was your first written lemon. It was so heated, descriptive, but so sweet as well. I like the realistic concept. I like how you broke the story down. As perverted as this sounds, it sounded so sensual with the way you wrote. I would be VERY proud if this were my lemon. I DEFINITELY approve. I like how Ed still had that temper despite being female, and how Roy still kept his attitude towards ed the same. I would give more but I am absolutely horrid at giving proper reviews. Over all I LOVE this story and would ADORE a sequel (and maybe give it a lemon too :P a nice thorough one like this maybe?) Have a nice day

This is hands down the best Ed (fem)/Mustang fic I have had the pleasure of reading. It was so well done, the emotions so relatable and I have nothing to criticize! Great job! I look forward to reading more of your works in the future! Thank you!

Hey do I really must give you credit here. The story was good. Ed had that Ed spark "the answer being spot on". And the Lemon fell into the romancy insteadfof"they did it"kind of which I really prefer. I liked the morning after scene and think I Erik move on to your other story which I believe you called loss "sorry if I'm wrong". heck maybe I can fall into the PM the author kind of pattern. either way I'll be reading that probably later tonight so see you then.

Lol loved it

This story was amazing. Are you planning on doing another fem!Ed x Roy. If you do I would honestly read it.

This story was actually kind of adorable. Roy is totally a softie deep down and I think that they could have a strong connection after this if you wanted to continue the story as a romance between the two. But this was a good ending nonetheless.
Write on:)

Claps forever* amazing. Just. Amazing.

I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSS T_T It is so in character and beautiful and...Edeline. 'Nuff said.

I loved the story