|Reviews for Broken Beyond Repair|
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/20/2016
I literally cried in this chapter!
| AinaWGSD chapter 9 . 5/1/2015
Thank you so much for ripping out my heart and smashing it into a thousand tiny pieces. Now I have to go find another box of tissues...
But in all seriousness, I think it was very well written. Thank you very much. (and yes, I know I should be reviewing In Our Time Apart first, but that one didn't make me cry, at least not yet anyway).
| dee's writing chapter 9 . 12/22/2014
Thank you so much for writing this, even though it's hard and painful for me to read, as I've lost someone similar the way Fili passed away, but I'd urged on to read to the end.
It is beautifully written.
| Fallengrace216 chapter 9 . 11/5/2014
I'm going to go sit in a corner and cry now...
| norma chapter 9 . 10/25/2014
I would like an alternate ending so Thorin and Kili will have a chance to make amends. Yes Kili too! - for if not for his stubbornness the accident might not have happened, and one is left to wonder if Fili had lived, would Thorin be successful in putting things right between him and Fili. Perhaps, with the help of Balin and Dwalin, Fili would be able to forgive and (even if it takes a longer time) forget. Personally I think forgiving is almost instant but forgetting takes longer time - it is possible to remember hurtful things although no longer with bitterness.
Beautiful writing to a sad story. Well done!
| Guest186 chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
Oh yes please! I'd very much like an alternate ending with Fili alive so Thorin can make amends for his mistakes and Fili can experience love and care from his uncle. You see, I always like to give people a second chance, especially if they have realised their mistakes. PJ is making Thorin more bad than he is in the book and I'm dreading the third movie, so let's be happy in fanfics:) I really love your writing although my heart broke with every chapter. Also thank you for the quick update every time.
| x beautifully broken x chapter 9 . 10/4/2014
I think I cried more reading this chapter then a whole story. Fili is my hero! Thank you for this! Ease the pain when the third movie comes out and we have to watch the brothers die!
| overlordred chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
Oh my God, I'm like a babbling brook right now! I couldn't take it when Fili died! I put off reading this chapter in front of people because I knew I'd be leaking like a faucet! But the feels were so right! But please I beg of you oh Mighty one to please write an alternative! I need to know what could've happened! Please...but the way it is now is very heartfelt and eye opening to what life is and what not to waste. Bravo my dear! And I bid you a goodnight
| Lakota1172 chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
That was beautiful.
That was truly one of the most beautiful chapters you have ever written, actually it was my favorite chapter I have EVER read in one of your stories! All these different emotions rushing through this chapter and me all at once, you had me in tears from the start.
Thank you very much for writing this story.
I loved it so much!
| Wraven chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
Yeah I need a tissue. *starts crying*.
| FiliandKili'sGirl18 chapter 9 . 10/3/2014
OH GOD! I need more tissues! Poor Kili...i just burst into tears when he started looking through his sketchbook. That whole chapter was heartbreaking!
| Lakota1172 chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
I'm gonna go and curl up in a ball and cry for a while now...
Gosh this is so real! I love this story and hate it so much at the same time!
You have a way of making me feel like this ;)
| Wraven chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
NO you can't do that. Now i'll be crying the rest of the day. ;)
| ACreativeHobbit chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
*sound of my exploding heart* Ahhhhhhhh! Noooooooo! Why do you do this to me?! Whyyyyyyy?! I bloody love it but dude? Why did you have to murder me with the utmost brutality?! *cries until tears run out and there is no more water in body*
| FiliandKili'sGirl18 chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
OH MY GOD YOU'RE KILLING ME! I'm in tears after reading this...which is a good thing in a way i guess